Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 341
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Tyler remained quiet as he continued to tighten his hold around Nan’s aching wrist as he pulled her through the main section of the resort. They started to pass the check–in/out section when Nan’s senses were practically on fire, and her wolf nearly surged forward.
She had to forcefully pull her back.
“Judy Montague,” a voice said from the front desk. “Can you just call her, please?”
“As I said, sir. If she’s in the competition, she isn’t here right now. You are more than welcome to go to the arena around the corner and root for her and her team, though. They return tonight. But I can’t give you her room information without her direct permission. We have a policy.”
“Can’t you just-
His voice started to fade as Nan was dragged outside.
Nan’s brows furrowed as her wolf fought against her hold, wanting to get back to the main section of the resort, but with Tyler’s hold on her and his anger growing with each step they took, Nan’s attention was shifted.
He brought her over to a secluded section, where he finally released her wrist. She noticed a new bright bruise on her wrist, and she rubbed the tender spot, avoiding his eyes.
“Where were you this morning?” He asked without hesitation, his eyes narrowed, burning her under his scrutiny. “At the arena,” she replied, glancing up at him with a frown.
“You didn’t call me to tell me you were going anywhere. I came by looking for you this morning,” he told her, his lips turned down in a deep frown.
“I wasn’t aware you were my keeper,” Nan shot back boldly; she knew she shouldn’t provoke him, but she needed to cut ties with him once and for all. “Look, Tyler, I didn’t sign up for this. You were only supposed to be a fun distraction, not this controlling-
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Before Nan could utter a single word, she felt the sharp sting of Tyler’s hand across her face.
He had struck her so hard that her head whipped to the side. She was seeing stars, and her eyes were wide in shock. In the week she had known him, he might have been cruel to her on occasions, and he put bruises on her wrist from grabbing her, but he hadn’t hit her yet.
His eyes were red with fury.
“Don’t you dare speak to me like that again,” he said through his teeth. “You know your place. I have chosen you … I plan to put my mark on you and claim you as mine. You aren’t getting away from me, Nan. Not now, not ever.”
“W….what?” Nan gasped, her hand touching her bruised and tender cheek, her fingers trembling. She fought back the tears that threatened to spill from her eyes.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....