Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 626
Gavin’s POV
Just as I stepped out of Judy’s condo, I nearly ran smack into another figure. I narrowed my eyes at the sudden delay, only to realize that it was Luna Lucy. Her eyes were wide as if I was the one who startled her.
I didn’t have time for her antics right now; I needed to find Judy. I had a knot in the pit of my stomach telling me that something was wrong, and no matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t bite back that feeling.
I walked around Lucy and started towards my car; I could feel Lucy following me, her steps hurried as she rushed to keep up.
“She’s not home?” She asked once she was at my side.
“Nope,” I said, ending the conversation before it began.
“Let me help you look for her, Alpha,” Lucy rushed out. “She’s my friend…”
“You should have stopped her from leaving if you were her friend,” I spat before I could stop myself. I was on thin ice, and I knew that; just because I was Lycan, didn’t mean I could trample on people whenever I wanted, especially not on someone else’s territory. There were still rules in place, and I was willing to break each and every single one of them if it meant having Judy back in my arms where she belonged.
“That’s not on me!” Lucy said, an anger sparked to life. “I tried to get her to stop, but she was devastated over something that you apparently did. Her leaving has nothing to do with me and everything to do with you. I’m not sure what you did to her, but—”
Before I could stop myself, my hand was around Lucy’s throat.
“I don’t care if you are the Luna of this pack, you don’t speak to me like that,” I said through my teeth, my wolf pushing his powers out, making my aura that much stronger.
Her eyes were wide, and her body trembled.
Before she could start gasping for breath, I released and turned towards my car. I knew once word of that got back to Sampson, hell would break loose.
“You’re right,” Lucy croaked, rubbing her sore neck. “I was a terrible friend… I never told her about Spencer’s undying obsession with her. I shouldn’t have let him take her, but I don’t think he’s going ot hurt her…”
My entire body went frigid. Just as I reached my car, I forced myself to turn around and look at this woman.
“What do you mean by obsession?” I asked her, trying to keep both myself and my wolf calm. “What aren’t you telling me?”
Lucy swallowed, her eyes brimming with crocodile tears.
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Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....