Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 342
Third Person POV
Nan staggers backward, ignoring the sting on her cheek and the blood in her mouth. She watched as Chester landed blow after blow in Tyler’s face, making him barely recognizable. Nan’s wolf whimpered at the sight of their mate and his clear anger.
Wait…
Chester??
What was he doing here?!
Chester’s hands were red and blistered from the force he was using to destroy Tyler’s face. For a moment, Tyler did try and fight him, but Chester was much bigger and stronger. Nan was so frozen that she couldn’t comprehend what was happening.
It was Mac’s scream that brought Nan’s attention back to reality.
“Tyler!” Mac cried, rushing towards them, Kelsey hot on her trail with equal panic. “Let my cousin go, you animal!!”
Mac tried to get Chester off Tyler; Chester was the kind of guy who would never put a woman in danger, so the second Mac was near him, he paused his rampage on Tyler’s face.
“You’re going to kill him,” Mac cried. “Who the hell are you?”
Kelsey glared at Nan, her eyes almost deadly and accusatory.
“Do you know him? Why aren’t you saying anything.”
Nan’s eyes never left Chester; she was frozen and beyond confused. She was in a different country, so how was it possible that Chester just happened to show up here out of the blue?
Chester was breathing deep, his rage palpable.
“Get this fucker out of here before I kill him,” he said through his teeth, his eyes on Mac’s pale face.
She could feel that he had Alpha blood boiling through him, and she knew better than to argue with an Alpha, even if he wasn’t an Alpha to any pack directly.
Chester released his hold on Tyler, who was broken and whimpering, barely able to see out of his eyes.
“Are you just going to stand there?” Kelsey asked, her eyes remaining on Nan, who remained frozen. “Tyler is your boyfriend!”
Chester growled furiously at her, the ground shaking under the force, drawing Kelsey’s attention to him.
“I suggest you leave immediately,” he said through his teeth, trying desperately to real in his anger.
Kelsey shot Nan one last look before Mac grabbed her arm.
“Help me get my cousin out of here,” she pleaded.
Kelsey pressed her lips together.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....