Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 624
Both Levi and Ron saw the effect Judy had on Ron’s nephew at the Gamma competition. He was transfixed on her the entire time, and Levi had the idea to use that to his advantage.
Now his nephew was in deep shit, or he would be if he were ever caught.
“Judy will be arriving at the Redcliff pack in a few hours. I need you to go there and get her settled. Make sure everything is set in motion with your nephew,” Levi said, cutting through Ron’s thoughts.
Ron nodded, running his hands through his hair.
“Yes, Alpha.”
He knew why Levi wouldn’t go to this pack himself; this pack was beneath him… it was the weakest of them all and had the weakest Gamma Force. He didn’t think this pack was deserving of a glimpse of the Lycan. It wasn’t worth his time or energy, so he always sent Ron in to do his dirty work. Ron was used to it, though the thought of using his own family sent him over the edge, he still forced a smile and did as his Alpha requested.
A couple of hours later, Ron was pulling into Redcliff and parking at the packhouse. Sampson was in his office when Ron entered. He didn’t bother knocking; he never did. When he was in Redcliff, he felt like a big boss. He basically was the big boss. He was the only one of true authority, besides their Alpha, that this pack had seen. They know Ron is the Beta of the Lycan… so in their minds, Ron is the closest thing to Levi than Levi himself.
Because of that, Ron was respected and feared, and he fed off that feeling. Part of the reason why he liked coming to this pack specifically.
“Have arrangements been made for Judy Montague?” Ron asked, narrowing his eyes at Alpha Sampson.
Sampson stood as soon as Ron entered, and he bowed out of respect to the Beta.
“Yes, everything is all set,” Sampson replied. “My mate Lucy is doing some finishing touches on the condo as we speak.”
“What time does her flight get in?” Ron asked, glancing at his watch. It was just past 5 pm.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...