Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 340
Chapter 0340
Third Person POV
Back in the arena, the competition streaming of the island was being played on a large screen. Today was day two of the island competition, and Nan had gone bright and early to watch.
She didn’t like sleeping in the hotel suite by herself last night; she felt alone and clouded with thoughts. But she knew this was important to Judy; this was the reason she was here, and Nan would support her 100% of the way.
The arena was crowded as everybody wanted to watch the competitors on the big screen, the island being captured by drones. Nan decided to go to the arena by herself, needing a break from Tyler and the girls. Spending time with him has been exhausting, and he’s giving her strange vibes lately. He’s been moody and showing signs of violent tendencies.
She stared down at the bruise on her first from the other day when she told him she needed space. She tried to walk away, but he grabbed her hard and told her not to walk away from him.
It scared her, she had to admit. She saw violence and anger in his eyes, and it made her shudder. It made her fear walking away from him. She counted the days until she could leave this country and return home.
Despite everything, home sounded really nice right now.
Her mind kept wandering back to Chester… her mate. The one who didn’t want her, the one she ran away from home because.
Her heart ached.
She wondered what he was doing and who he was doing it with. Because they weren’t bonded, she couldn’t feel it when he was intimate with other women. But she wondered if it was still sleeping with that maid or maybe Becca from the boutique. Nan was certain there were others; he was the kind of guy who slept around without a care in the world. She didn’t think a mate would stop that.
Did he even know she wasn’t in the country?
Her heart ached even more at the thought, and she swallowed down a sob.
“Hey, girl,” Mac said, sitting down beside her, a frown marring her lips. “Where have you been? Tyler is upset. He’s looking for you.”
Nan’s face grew pale; the thought of Tyler upset did not sit right with her. She rubbed the bruise on her wrist, remembering the last time he was upset. Mac didn’t seem to notice, though, and watched the big screen thoughtfully, leaning back in her seat.
“I’ve been here. I just needed some space,” Nan admitted.
“Kelsey is trying to calm him,” Mac said, rolling her eyes. “He’s overly dramatic sometimes.”
“Where is he?” Nan asked, looking around, trying to get a glimpse of him.
“Right outside the arena,” she answered.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....