Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 98
Chapter 0098
“They are still out?” One of the guys asked, peeking into the cage.
“Looks that way,” another muttered, “It’s late; we might as well just do this tomorrow.”
“He wanted it done tonight,” the other rogue muttered.
“Yeah, but he made it clear that he wanted her to be awake and to know why she was being killed. He wants it recorded so he could have it as evidence,” he reminded his buddy.
“And the other one?”
“We’ll call it a bonus,” the rogue laughed. “Let’s get some sleep and return here tomorrow.”
They walked away again. Once the door was shut, I opened my eyes and let out a shaky breath.
I looked down at Irene to see that she was still sleeping. I counted the minutes until she woke and when I felt her hand twitching by my side, I let out another breath. She was finally waking up; I won’t be alone in here and we can figure out what to do.
I pulled her head onto my lap while she woke. It was a long process and a lot of soft groaning; I’m sure she probably felt hungover as well. But eventually, her eyes fluttered open and met mine.
“Judy?” She asked in a soft whisper. “W… what happened?”
“I don’t want you to freak out,” I told her softly, but I knew my tone worried her. She lifted her head and immediately yelped when she felt the burning of the silver around her wrists.
She glanced at her wrists and then back at me, her eyes large with alarm.
“W…wh…” she started to stammer, panic clear on her face.
“I told you not to freak out,” I reminded her.
She looked around, noticing that we were in a cage and tears filled her
“What’s going on?” She asked in a terrified whisper.
eyes.
“It’s going to be okay, Irene. We are going to figure this out and get out of here,” I assured her, but even
I wasn’t sure how we were going to manage that. “But think we were kidnapped…”
Her entire body trembled as she sat all the way up; tears welling up in her eyes.
“H…how?” She asked. “I don’t understand. Why??”
“I don’t have any of the answers,” I told her, pressing my knees to my chest. “But they are waiting until morning.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...