Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 99
Chapter 0099
Judy’s POV
“Kill us?? W…why would they want to kill us?” Irene stammered, panic clear in her eyes. “W…what did we do.”
“Okay, Irene. I need you to listen to me,” I said, sliding over to her, trying not to move the cuffs around my wrists too much because they stung badly. “You have to calm down. If they find out we are awake, they might come back sooner than later and kill us right away. Right now, we have the element of surprise on our hands. They don’t know we are awake.
I knew we were in the basement, but I wasn’t sure if they could hear us. I could hear their shoes creaking on the floorboards above us, and I silenced my voice even more, worried about our safety.
“So, are we just supposed to sit here and pretend we are asleep?” She asked, tears welling in her eyes.
“Until we can come up with a better plan, we need to do what we can to survive,” I told her.
She wrapped her arms around her body, but immediately yelped when the cuffs moved around her wrists, burning her. She let out a soft sob as tears ran down her pale cheeks.
“My father will find us…” she whispered. “He’s the most powerful werewolf in this entire world. He has to find us…”
I wanted to believe that she was right, but my heart was in my stomach. I didn’t want to admit to Irene that I was terrified as well. I had been training my entire life to be a gamma warrior and now that I’m in immediate danger, it’s like all my training had been forgotten.
There was no window in this basement, so I had no idea what time it was. As I scanned my surroundings, I noticed a vent on the ceiling. I let my mind briefly wander and I wondered if I would be able to get into that vent. But until I got these handcuffs off my wrists, the likelihood of getting into that vent was slim. Irene slid her knees to her chest and buried her face in her lap as she took a shaky deep breath. “We are going to get out of here…” she kept whispering to herself. “We have to get out of here…”
Third Person POV
Ethan’s subordinate sent him a text message in the evening telling him that it was all set. He smiled to himself, knowing he had the upper hand once again. Judy had been kidnapped by harmless packmates and being stored somewhere, waiting for someone to save her. They were probably using silver cuffs and wolfsbane to keep her weak, but otherwise, she should be safe. Not that Judy knows she is safe; she thinks she’s in danger and that’s all that matters to him the most.
He was going to let her sit in confinement for about 24 hours and then he would rescue her. She would be so grateful to him for saving her, that she would do whatever he wants, including becoming his
mistress.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...