Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 97
Chapter 0097
Judy’s POV
I woke up to the sounds of murmurs nearby; my memory of what had happened was a bit foggy and my head ached like I was hungover, but I don’t remember drinking that much. I had mainly water with a few sips of white wine at dinner, but it wasn’t enough to make me hungover. I don’t even remember falling asleep.
My fingers twitched as I came to, and I could feel the cold concrete ground beneath me. That was part of the reason why my body was aching. Then I felt the cold metal chains around my wrists and the burning that the silver invoked. Silver was a werewolf’s weakness, and I knew before I even opened my eyes that I wouldn’t be able to channel my wolf or send out a mindlink to anyone in my pack.
I also knew that I was in danger.
A slight memory came back to me, and I remember running and laughing with Irene by my side. Was Irene here with me? Did she somehow set me up? Maybe she didn’t believe me when I told her that nothing was going on between Ethan and me. Maybe this was part of her plan; to make sure the guards didn’t follow us so she could kidnap me and possibly kill me.
Another memory resurfaced and I remembered watching Irene fall to the ground after a man attacked her. He stabbed her in the neck with a syringe and she passed out immediately. My heart hammered in my chest, and I knew my breathing was unsteady. I tried to keep it steady just in case I wasn’t alone wherever I was.
I could hear the light whispers from some men nearby and I tried to channel my wolf so I could hear better, but to no prevail. However, their voices grew louder as their footsteps neared. I might not have my wolf senses, but the moment they were close enough, I could smell them. It was the same sickly scent from before.
Rogues.
“I thought we were only paid to capture one girl,” one of the rogues asked in a harsh whisper.
“So, we’ll ask for more money,” another said with a dark chuckle. “Who are they anyways?”
“I don’t fucking know. I didn’t ask questions. He gave me a price and I told him no problein,” another rogue muttered. “I’m starving; let’s get some food while we wait for them to wake up. It’ll probably be a while. We used a lot of wolfsbane.”
They sauntered off; the sounds of their shoes growing more distant and then I heard the opening and shutting of a door, along with a lock.
So far, telling from their voices, there were 3 of them. But I remembered there being more than that before I passed out.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...