Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 91
Chapter 0091
My heart lightened a little; I felt bad for her. She had no idea about the cruel jerk she was engaged to, but maybe she would start to understand things on her own. I brushed the thought out of my head; it wasn’t my problem or concern. I was here to do a job and that was it. My main focus was on my father and getting his debt paid so he could return to my mother, and we could be a happy family once again.
Matt and I spent the next couple of hours sparring and practicing his defense moves. Once we were finished, were both panting and covered in sweat.
“Good practice,” I praised, patting him on the back. “You’ve been improving greatly.”
“I have a great tutor,” he replied with a beaming smile. “Thanks for helping me, Judy.“.
“You should get inside and shower before dinner. I’m sure the maids are in the process of cooking it as we speak,” I told him, glancing at my watch and seeing that it was just past 5 pm.
He nodded and hurried inside. My eyes wandered over to Irene who was no longer staring at her phone; instead, she was staring at me. She had an expression on her face that I couldn’t quite read… maybe it was nervousness. Like she wanted to talk to me about something, but she was too afraid to bring it up. I figured if she wanted to talk, she would, so I turned away and started to clean up my supplies, shoving them into my bag.
I hadn’t noticed, or heard her, moving from her seat, but by the time I was done packing up my things and turning back around, she was standing right behind me. I nearly fell backward in shock.
“Sorry,” she murmured. “I didn’t mean to scare you…
She bit her lower lip and rubbed the back of her arm awkwardly as she stood in front of me. I sighed, giving in.
“Is everything okay, Irene?” I asked her. “You seem off today.”
As if she was snapping herself out of her daze, she blinked a few times and then lifted her gaze to meet mine.
“I’m not really sure. I guess I’m just confused,” she admitted. “Judy, do you want to go shopping with me tonight?”
I raised my brows.
“I don’t really have the money to go shopping,” I admitted, feeling my cheeks redden.
“It would be my treat of course,” she said hurriedly. “We can grab something for dinner too. Just the two of us.”
“Is there a reason behind it?” I asked her, raising my brows.
“No… I just need someone to talk to,” she said softly, glancing at the ground.
“I’m not sure if I’m the best one for that, Irene…” I tried to say, but she quickly stopped me.
“I don’t have anyone else, Judy,” she said quickly. “I could use some girl time… please…” she pleaded.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...