Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 92
Chapter 0092
Judy’s POV
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I was momentarily stunned by his words. Did he really think I was so cruel and conniving that I would purposely hurt someone to get what I wanted? The only thing I wanted was to work hard and pay off my father’s debt, I wasn’t looking for anything and I certainly didn’t want to hurt anyone. Ethan was doing enough of that for the both of us.
I didn’t have to stand here and let him ridicule me though; I was fed up with being looked down on. I pulled my arm out of his grip and glared up at Gavin, my rage evident in my eyes.
“I don’t want to hurt anyone,” I told him. “I’m capable of hanging out with your daughter and being friends with her without any alternative motives, Alpha Gavin. If you have a problem with me being friends with her, then perhaps you should speak to her about it. She was the one who invited me out after all.”
I didn’t bother to stick around and listen to his response. I turned and quickly hurried up the stairs and after Irene. Though, I could feel Gavin’s eyes burning in a hole in the back of my head. I wondered what he was thinking at that moment or if he believed me.
I walked into Irene’s bedroom; she was busy throwing together an outfit for me. She smiled when she saw me at the doorway.
“Did father upset you?” She asked after a quick assessment of my face.
“No,” I lied. “He was just talking to me about Matt’s studies.”
She nodded thoughtfully as she went back to picking out an outfit.
“Here, put this on,” she said, handing me a white crop top and a pair of Capri jeans. I took them and went into her bathroom. The clothing fit a bit tighter than it would have fit her because she’s smaller than me, but it wasn’t uncomfortable, and they were honestly cute. I slid my shoes back onto my feet and brushed out my hair, taking it out of tight restraints. I splashed some cold and sprayed some body spray on myself to make myself smell better. Once satisfied, I left the bathroom to meet with Irene. She smiled widely at me when she saw my appearance
“You look amazing,” she breathed. “You can just put your dirty clothes in my hamper. The maids will clean it later.”
I hesitated, but I eventually did what she said and put the dirty clothes in her hamper near her closet. Irene draped an arm through mine and gave me another wide smile.
“Come on,” she said, motioning for me to follow her.
I followed after her; we went down the stairs and I saw that Gavin was speaking to his driver, Leroy, at the front door. Irene frowned and folded her arms across her chest.
“What are you doing?” She asked, narrowing her eyes at her father.
“Leroy is going to take you girls into the city,” he answered.
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Chapter 0092
“I was planning on driving my new car,” Irene said with a pout.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...