Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 90
Chapter 0090
Judy’s POV
“He kissed you?!” Nan shrieked on the phone the next afternoon. I had to pull the phone away from my ear at the sound of her loud voice.
“Yes,” I told her. “It was unexpected.”
The Uber driver parked the car outside of Gavin’s villa. I thanked him before handing him his tip and got out of the car.
“Nan, I have to go, I just got to work,” I told her, rushing her off the phone as I ascended the steps that led to the front door.
“Okay, but you have to call me later. I need all the details,” she told me.
“Will do,” I assured her, and then I hung up the phone.
Truth be told, there weren’t many details to tell her. The kiss was decent enough, but it wasn’t anything to write home about. It didn’t ignite my passion or leave me feeling breathless… it didn’t even make my legs weak. It was nothing like the kiss I’ve shared with Gavin in the past.
My cheeks warmed at the thought.
Why was Gavin popping up in my head at moments like these? I should not be thinking about Gavin or his kisses. That was the last thing I should be thinking about right now. But even during my date last night when I was with Walter, I couldn’t help but wonder what it would have been like to be with Gavin. To have Gavin’s arms wrapped around me while we danced under the moonlight to beautiful jazz music. What it would have been like to have his lips pressed against mine during the heat of the passion and to know that I was the only one he wanted to be with.
I needed to get a grip on myself because those thoughts were ridiculous. Those things could never happen. He was my boss and nothing more. Just because we almost had sex that one time, doesn’t mean he has any type of feelings towards me.
If anything, he felt the opposite. He thought of me as a showgirl. Someone he can have one–night stands with and never see again.
The thought left an unsettled feeling in my chest that swallowed down.
Adam stood at the doorway with an indifferent look on his face. I knew he was still upset with me for making him look foolish in front of his boss. Now, he wasn’t even allowed to speak in the presence of Gavin. It’s not like it was my fault; Adam was the one who was trying to get me fired the moment I got the job. I still didn’t understand why that was; I mean Adam was the one who invited me to apply for this job in the first place.
“Master Matthew is waiting for you in the parlor,” he told me. “He’s already gotten a head start on his homework. I think he’s eager to spar this evening.”
I smiled at the thought.
“Thanks, Adam,” I said to him, trying to be polite.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...