Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 87
Chapter 0087
“I do love her, sir,” Ethan said, bowing his head in my direction. “I would never do anything to hurt her.”
“I took Judy on a date last night; Ethan and Irene happened to be at the same restaurant. He was staring at her the entire time,” Walter said through his teeth.
I wasn’t expecting Walter to openly tell me about his date after I forbade him from going near Judy. But he was so angry with Ethan, I don’t think he realized he had done it.
“I thought I told you to stay away from her,” I said in a growly tone, staring at my nephew.
Walter sighed and lifted his gaze to meet mine.
“I know, Uncle and
I’m sorry. But I couldn’t help it. She’s not like any other woman I had ever met. She’s incredible and we have so much in common. I really like her, and I think she might like me too,” Walter explained.
My blood ran cold at the sound of him speaking about her. I didn’t really have a right to tell him that he couldn’t pursue Judy though. What Judy did in her free time, wasn’t my business and I had to keep reminding myself that.
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“We are going out again tonight,” Walter continued. I don’t want to date her behind your back, but I will if needed.”
I pressed my lips together, my eyes never leaving his
“You have some nerve,” Ethan said, folding his arms across his chest. “I saw the way the waitress was flirting with you the entire date. You barely did anything about it.”
Walter scowled.
“Not that it’s any of your concern, but she had been dealt with. Judy and I spoke about it and she’s fine,” Walter told him firmly.
Ethan rolled his eyes and shook his head.
“Judy is smart, and she’ll see right through you one day. You two aren’t going to last,” Ethan muttered.
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“That’s enough!” I said, bringing the conversation to order and bringing their attention back to This isn’t about Judy; this is about Irene. I swear to the Goddess, Ethan, if you hurt my daughter, I won’t hesitate to kill you. But first, I’d simply torture you because death would be too good.”
I knew my Alpha aura was darkening, and Ethan shivered as he bowed his head and nodded.
“I would never hurt her. I love her, Alpha,” Ethan assured me.
Even as he said those words, I didn’t truly believe them. Walter was right; it was strange that he would leave his fated mate for my daughter. Unless it was because he knows that with Irene by his side, I’d grant him the role of Alpha of the Redmoon pack.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...