Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 88
Chapter 0088
Judy’s POV
I wasn’t really sure what I was expecting, but an actual light show gallery was not it. The entire event was busy with people, and it was completely outside. It was the most spectacular thing I had ever witnessed. There was a ton of artwork created by packmates from all over, and the work was lit up in the most gorgeous lighting I had ever seen. My mind was whirling as we walked around the outdoor gallery.. Walter told me that I didn’t need to dress up for this event, so I settled on a pair of jeans and a nice blouse that showed off a
he waited in the car wit of my cleavage, but not too much to distract him. Once again, Max drove, but
he waited in the car while we enjoyed the gallery. There were some food trucks parked on the side of the road as well and Walter mentioned trying out some food. I agreed and we walked to the food trucks together.
“How did you even know about this place?” I asked him once t
I my corn dog, and Walter got his chili dog. I smiled at the thought of him eating a chili dog; last night we were eating luxury food, and now we were eating basic street food.
He took a bite of the chili dog, getting some on his cheek in the process and then he took a sip of his giant soda.
“Irene mentioned it,” he admitted. I frowned at him.
“What?” I asked.
“She said something about wanting to check it out. I thought it would be fun for us to do,” he said with a shrug.
My heart fell into my stomach as I looked around, a frown marring my lips.
“Did she say something about coming here?” I asked, trying not to sound bothered, but I couldn’t help myself. The last thing I wanted was for Ethan to showap.
“I think she might have changed her mind. Ethan and she have been having some arguments lately,” he murmured. “I don’t think she was in the mood to go anywhere tonight.”
I nodded, biting my lower lip. Ethan hadn’t been exactly subtle lately and I worried that it would start affecting his relationship with Irene. If they broke up, Gavin would blame me and then there would be no doubt in my mind that he’d fire me.
“This is delicious,” he said, taking another large bite. Who knew sloppy flood could taste so good.”
I couldn’t help but smile as I grabbed one of my napkins. I stepped towards him and started to wipe his cheek
“Um, everybody,” I told him.
When we finished our food, we threw away our trash and then walked around the gallery some more. There was one sculpture made of white marble that stood out amongst all. It was a carving of a woman with long flowing hair that wrapped around her narrow waist, and she wore a gown that covered most of her body, but in a way that showed off each of her curves. She was smiling up at the sky, her eyes fixed on the moon above and her arms held out like she was trying to reach for the stars. She was wrapped
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...