Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 86
Chapter 0086
Gavin’s POV
“Alpha, I need to tell you something,” Beta Taylor said from the front seat as we drove back to the villa. It’s been a long day in the office and the last thing I wanted right now was some bad news. I was still fuming after catching my nephew on top of Judy in broad daylight yesterday. I hadn’t spoken to either of them since catching them in the act.
I knew I shouldn’t have reacted in the way that I did; I didn’t have anything against Walter. He was a fine kid with a good head on his shoulders. He was successful and took after his father, who I also had a decent relationship with. But I didn’t trust him with Judy. My stomach twisted at the thought of it and I couldn’t shake that feeling
I brushed the thought out of my head and turned to look at my Beta whose eyes were fixed out the front window.
“Well, spit it out,” I demanded, already losing my patience.
“It’s about Judy and Walter,” he said, sounding a bit sheepish.
My blood ran cold.
“What about them?” I asked through my teeth.
“They were spotted last night on a date,“he blurted. They went to a luxurious restaurant and were seen holding hands.”
I was seeing fucking red after My beta told me this news. I told Walter specifically to stay away from Judy and he didn’t listen. Judy didn’t listen either and she knew that I could fire her at any moment. Was this a risk she was willing to take? Or maybe she risked it because she knew that my nephew came from money, and he could help pay her father’s debt.
She was sneaky and I wasn’t going to let her get away with this nonsense.
“Floor it!” I growled. “I need to get home immediately”
“Yes, Alpha,” Taylor said, pressing harder on the gas. He knew better than to talk to me casually at this moment. He also knew better than to go against me.
He floored it and we made it back to my villa in record time. I didn’t bother saying anything to Taylor as I stormed out of the car and into the Villa.
Adam bowed at me in greeting; he still couldn’t speak because I forbade it. I didn’t pay him any attention though; I quickly hurried into the parlor, expecting to see Judy tutoring Matthew but what I saw was something completely different.
It was Walter and Ethan; Walter had Ethan by the collar and was pressing him against the wall, fury radiating off him in waves.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...