Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 83
Chapter 0083
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more, the waitress.
Before I could say anything with a bottle of red wine and a couple of glasses.
“The best wine we have tonight is the Chateau Lafite Rothschild Pauillac,” she told him, her eyes never leaving his.
He nodded.
“Sounds great,” he said. “Can you poor my date a glass first.”
The waitress frowned and glanced in my direction. I gave her a fake smile, leaning back in my y seat. She straightened her posture and poured me a glass of wine; the red elixir glistening from the crystal glass and the illuminating lighting of the chandelier above us.
She turned her attention back to Walter and her expression softened; that flirty smile returned as she poured him a glass.
“Is there anything else I can get for you?” She asked, putting her hand on his bicep.
He glanced at her hand with a frown, and then he took her hand into his, promptly removing her hand from his arm. She frowned at the gesture.
“Let’s try to remain professional, shall we?” He asked corking his eyebrow up. “There’s no need to be disrespectful towards my date.”
She straightened her posture, and I saw her face turning beat red.
“I… uh…” she stammered.
“Just check on our meals,” he ordered, waving her away dismissively.
She swallowed and then quickly hurried away from the table. He sighed and met my eyes.
“I’m sorry I didn’t notice that earlier,” he said with a kind smile. “I promise, the rest of the evening, I’ll try my best to make sure you are comfortable.”
“I truly appreciate that, Walter,” I told him, and I meant that.
“Let’s
V the rest of the evening,” he said, lifting his wine glass in the air. I smiled and lifted mine in the air. We clinked the glasses together and we both took a sip.
Third Person POV
Judy was so preoccupied with her date with Walter, that she couldn’t feel Ethan glaring at the back of her head. He was fuming in his seat; Irene was babbling about something that didn’t interest him in the least. All he could think about was Judy and how she could possibly be on a date with another man.
Then again, he was on a date with a woman. The very woman he left his fated mate for; but it was all for good reason. At least, that’s what he told himself. His wolf was still aggravated over the fact that he broke up with their fated mate for another she–wolf, but it was all so Ethan could become the new Alpha of the Redmoon pack.
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Once Ethan got everything he wanted, his wolf would be happier.
But that also included Judy; he wanted Judy, and he wasn’t going to stop until he got her in that house he bought for her.
“Are you even listening to me?” Irene asked, folding her arms across her chest.
Ethan blinked a few times, forgetting that Irene was talking to him and not hearing a single thing she had just said.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...