Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 82
Chapter 0082
Judy’s POV
“Judy?” Irene’s voice cut through my thoughts just as we were walking by their table.
I forced a smile in her direction, ignoring Ethan’s gaze
“Hello, Irene,” I said politely.
“It is you,” she said, her tone sounding a bit strained. “What are you doing here? I didn’t know you liked places like this.”
Walter’s arm draped around my shoulders and as if seeing him for the first time, Irene immediately perked up.
“Wallie, are you two on a date?” She asked him.
He grinned at his cousin.
“We are,” he answered.
I felt my cheeks burning; I didn’t think he would be so forward like this; what if Irene told Gavin that she ran into us?
Irene turned to look at me.
“You are a lucky lady,” she told me. “My cousin is very picky when it comes to women he dates. Your must be very special. Especially to go against father’s wishes.”
“I wouldn’t go that far,” I said with an awkward laugh,
Walter grinned.
“I would,” he said, making me blush even harder. “If you’ll excuse us, Rena, our table is waiting.”
“Of course,” Irene said, motioning for us to go.
I glanced at Ethan just before we turned to leave, and could see his eyes burning daggers into me. I swallowed and turned away from him, following Walter and the hostess to the table. We were at a distance from Irene and Ethan, but we could still see them clearly. I sat down in front of Walter as the waitress handed us each a menu.
“Your waitress will be right with you,” she said; her eyes never leaving Walter. When he looked up at her and gave her a polite nod, she blushed and then she winked at him. I pressed my lips together and watched as she swayed her hips back to the hostess stand. I didn’t feel jealous towards the woman, but I couldn’t help but feel disrespected.
“Get anything you want,” Walter told me, bringing my attention back to him. “Don’t worry about the
I smiled and nodded as I scanned the menu, it was no wonder he brought up the cast, everything on the menu was so expensive. The waitress appeared moments later and like the hostess, she only had eyes.
for Walter
Chapter 0062
+25 BONUS
“Hello, Mr. Landry,” she said, batting her long lashes at him. “It’s such an honor to serve you.” She put a hand on his shoulder and squeezed it but kept her hand lingering there. “You are much more handsome in person. I am such a huge fan of yours.”
He frowned up at her, but he didn’t remove her hand from his shoulder, which bothered me a little. It was disrespectful towards me that she was openly flirting with him, and he wasn’t doing anything about
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it.
“I appreciate that,” he said, turning his frown into a grin. “Can you bring us your best bottle of wine? And what’s the specials for this evening?”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...