Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 84
Chapter 0084
Judy’s POV
“This was a lovely evening, Walter,” I say as we walked up to my front door. The porch light was left on, providing us with the light needed to make it from the car to the front door without any issues. The moon was hidden behind dark clouds, and I could already smell the rain in the air.
As we reached the front door, I paused and turned to face him. I wasn’t used to anyone walking me to the front door; not even Ethan showed me that much concern. If he were to drop me off, he’d kiss me in the car and drive away once I reached the door. Gavin drove away after I got inside; not that Gavin needed to walk me to my door; we weren’t dating or anything. He was just my boss and there was nothing more to it.
My cheeks burned as I thought about Gavin walking me to the door. Would he kiss me if he did walk me to the door? Why was I even thinking about this while was on a date with another man? I shouldn’t be thinking about kissing Gavin at any time of the day, let alone while I was with someone else.
I brushed the thought out of my mind and glanced up at Walter who was smiling down at me.
“I’m glad you enjoyed yourself,” he said, taking hold of my hand. “I had quite a good time myself. You’ve truly made my first night here impressionable.
I beamed at the compliment.
“I’m glad to hear that,” I told him, biting my lower lip.
“Can I take you out again tomorrow?” He asked.
I raised my brows, trying to internally figure out my schedule for tomorrow. I had classes in the morning and then in the evening, I had to tutor Matt.
I sighed.
“I have tutoring tomorrow evening,” I told him.
“We can go after tutoring,” he told me with a bright smile. “There’s a gallery I’d like to take you to.”
I frowned at him.
“At night?”
He nodded.
“It’s an outdoor light gallery,” he explained. “I’ve been curious about it and I figured maybe you’d want to join me?”
I thought about it for a moment before deciding to go for it; Nan would want me to go for it and if I told her I declined him, she would be furious with me. So, Inodded in response.
“Okay,” I answered. “That sounds great.”
He smiled, revealing dimples on his cheeks; just like his uncle, only his uncle had manlier features.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...