Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 81
Chapter 0081
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“Let me do your hair and makeup now,” Nan said, grabbing her bag which consisted of hair supplies and makeup. I smiled at her and sat down at the vanity across the room. She got to work on my hair, brushing it out again and then blow–drying it. She got her curling iron and curled it, so it was wavy
vand flowed evenly around my shoulders. She put a hairpin in my hair to keep my side bangs out of my face and then she started on my makeup.
By the time she finished, I barely recognized myself.
“Wow,” I breathed.
“You look amazing,” she said, putting an arm around my shoulders. “He’s going to die when he sees
you.
She grabbed a bottle of perfume and spritzed it at me, making me wince because some of it got into my
eyes.
“Sorry,” she chuckled.
Just then, the doorbell rang and I froze.
“Oh, my goddess!” she nearly shouted, grabbing my arm and tugging me towards the door. “He’s here!”
I swallowed the lump in my throat and followed her out of my room. I grabbed my purse that hung on the door handle before shutting the door behind me. I quickly followed her down the stairs where she grabbed a pair of black heals that were tossed in the corner of the living room.
“I saw these earlier, you have to wear them,” she told me.
1 frowned.
“They’re my mothers,” I told her.
“She won’t mind,” she said, waving off my concern. You two are the same size. These heals go great with that dress.”
I relented, putting the shoes on. They made me about an inch taller, but not too tall. Walter will still be a good foot taller than me. She gave me one last look before motioning for the door.
“I’ll hide, you get the door,” she whispered and then disappeared around the corner. I shook my head at her retreating back and grabbed the doorknob, turning it just as he rang the bell again. He froze when he sw me and his eyes grew large
“Wow” he said under his breath, taking in my appearance from head to toe. “You look….” His voice trailed off, unsure of what to say
“You don’t look so bad yourself,” I said, assuming he was going to say I looked good. He did look great his suit and red tie; his curly blonde hair was gelled out of his face, and he was neatly shaved.
I smiled at the effort he put into his own appearance.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...