Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 80
Chapter 0080
Judy’s POV
“I can’t believe you are actually going on a date with Gavin Landry’s nephew!” Nan shrieked as we both rummaged through my wardrobe. Walter was going to pick me up in a couple of hours and I had nothing to wear for this evening. I was so nervous that my stomach felt like it was about to turn inside out.
“Maybe this was a bad idea,” I said, turning around to face her.
She frowned at me.
“Are you kidding me?” She gasped. “Walter Landry is eye candy; he’s fucking hot. Of course, he’s not Gavin Landry Hot, but holy smokes that gene pool is strong.
I rolled my eyes at my overly excited best friend..
“I’m serious, Nan. What was I thinking?” I asked, shaking my head.
“Does it even matter?” She asked. “Why are you stressing out about this? You said it yourself that you. are attracted to him.”
“I would have to be blind to not be attracted to him,” Imurmured.
“I just can’t believe that you met him by chance at the library,” she said, shaking her head. “I never took him for much of a reader.”
I raised my brows at her.
He owns his own publication,” I reminded her, “All he does is read and write.”
“Yeah, but I thought it was all for show. He’s too hot to be hidden behind a boring book. He should be at model or something.”
I laughed at her words.
I didn’t particularly appreciate having to lie to her about how I met Walter. But she couldn’t know that I met him while at Gavin’s villa. I told her I was studying at the library this morning and Walter just happened to be there. We talked for a bit and then he asked me out. Nan and I had been aimlessly rummaging through my clothing, trying to find the perfect outfit for tonight. We’ve been here for about an hour and we both have been coming up empty–handed.
“He might be hot, but he’s intelligent and really good at what he does. I’ve been following his work for a long time, and I’m impressed with him. I’m just worried he be impressed with me,” I admitted, biting my lower lip.
Walter did a lot of writing about the French Gamma Warriors and took many photos from the battlegrounds. I’ve done reports based on his work many times in the past.
“What about this?” Nan asked, pulling out a small black dress.
1 frowned at it and then looked at Nan with narrowed eyes.
“It’s a little small, don’t you think?” I asked her. “I doubt it’s appropriate for a date with a Landry.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...