Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 533
“We need to talk.”
I hadn’t realized I stopped breathing until his hand was wrapping around my wrist and he was pulling me away from the car. My legs felt like complete Jello as I followed after him, my heart racing at lightning speed in my chest.
I wasn’t sure where he was taking me, but it wasn’t inside. We wandered around the villa exterior and then suddenly he stopped, turning to look at me, his eyes dark and soul searching, leaving me paralyzed as I looked back at him.
“Tell me what happened the other night,” he said, his eyes narrowed as he studied me.
My face paled.
“What?” I asked him.
He stepped closer to me, his body only inches from mine, and made my heart beat even faster.
“Don’t play stupid with me, Judy. The Grand Casino Hotel… tell me what happened there.”
I studied him for a moment; he was so out of it that night that there was no way he would remember anything happening. Even so, it wasn’t me he wanted there with him… it was Rachel. It was Rachel he thought he was kissing.
“I don’t know what you’re talking about,” I told him, my voice coming out almost hollow.
He scowled at me, walked towards me and I took a step back, trying to gain some distance between us, until my back was pressed against the building and there was literally nowhere for me to go. He put his hands on either side of me, resting them on them on the building.
“Then why the fuck did I taste you on my lips?” He asked me. “Why do I remember the way you moaned my name? Why do I remember your warm breath on my skin?” His tone deepened with each question he asked, his lips growing nearer to my skin, making me tremble from his scrutiny.
My breathing was harsh as I tried hard not to look at him, but he made it impossible by how close he was.
“I don’t know…” I whisper. “Maybe you were dreaming…”
“Bullshit,” he said through his teeth.
I watched him as he ran his fingers through his hair, the confusion and conflict clear on his face as he processed this new information.
After a moment of heated silence, he turned away and walked around the corner, leaving me alone with my thoughts and rapid beating heart.
It took a while for me to move from my spot. Instead of going home, I had Taylor drop me off at the mansion. It’s been a while since I saw Irene and the baby, and I could use a distraction.
Irene was in the living room, feeding the baby, when I arrived. She looked pleased to see me.
“Oh, good. I was going to call you today,” she told me as I sat down on one of the couches.
“Why?” I asked in return.
“Because there’s a charity event happening on Sunday and I’m expected to go,” she told me. “Since I don’t have a plus one… and I really don’t want to go alone… I was kind of hoping that maybe you’d come with me??”
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....