Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 532
Judy’s POV
I sat motionless as I stared at Gavin and Rachel in the archway of the parlor. Matt also tensed from beside me, though his eyes were fixed on his books in front of him, and not on the pair of them. My eyes never left Gavin’s, and his eyes seemed to be glued to mine as well, though I couldn’t decipher the emotion lingering in them.
Without taking his eyes off me, Gavin asked, “Why were you looking for me?”
Rachel held herself closer to him, clinging to his arm like it was her lifeline.
“I wanted to ask your opinion on a few outfit choices for the charity banquet on Sunday,” practically purred. “I want to dress to impress after all. It’s not often you get asked to be the date of Gavin Landry to an important event like that.”
My heart clenched in my chest as I stared at him. His face was indifferent, and his body was tense as he listened to what she said.
As if just noticing me in the room, Rachel’s eyes flickered to mine, and she smiled.
“Oh, hi Judy. I didn’t see you there,” she said. “You seem hard at work. Don’t let us disturb you.”
Rachel tugged on Gavin’s arm; he stood firm for a moment, his eyes still on me, and I wasn’t sure why he was staring at me like that. But then, almost reluctantly, Gavin turned and left with her.
I stared at the open archway that Gavin once stood in, my heart feeling almost empty and my hands trembling uncontrollably.
“Is my dad going to marry Miss Rachel?” Matt suddenly asked, finally lifting his gaze from the book to meet mine.
I felt my face pale at his question, and I met his eyes.
“Why do you ask?” I asked him, my voice coming out strained.
“Because Rachel told me she was going to be my new mom,” Matt said, a grimace on his face. “But I don’t want her to be my mom… I don’t really like her. She’s different…”
“Different how?” I asked, raising my brows.
“That’s really big of you, Matthew. I’m so proud of you for coming up with that conclusion on your own,” I told him, giving him a gentle squeeze. “I think a little bit more space will do you both some good for right now. Plus, your father is actively trying to find a couple to adopt Emalyn, and until then, Irene has a responsibility. It’s better if she stays there for right now.”
He nodded like he understood, though he still looked a bit conflicted.
“I wish you could just marry my dad,” he finally said, his voice almost vulnerable. “You’d be a much better mom…”
I pressed my lips together, trying hard not to cry. I wanted to tell him, “Me too,” but the words died on my lips. Instead, I gave him another squeeze and then a pat on the back.
“Let’s get back to work,” I tell him.
He reluctantly agreed.
We spent the next few hours studying and then going over combat and defense techniques. I hadn’t seen or heard from Gavin the rest of the time, but just as I approached Beta Taylor’s waiting car, a hand stopped the car door from opening. I quickly turned to see Gavin standing only inches from me, his gaze penetrating through me.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....