Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 50
Chapter 0050
Judy’s POV
All three of them stared at me. Irene and Matt with smiles on their faces and Gavin with a frown.
I stood in front of them with my eyes wide and my heart thuddling violently in my chest. I wasn’t sure what to say as an excuse to get out of this. There was no way I was going to have dinner with Gavin and his family.
“I really should go.” I managed to sputter, pointing over my shoulder at the door and giving an awkward and desperate–sounding laugh.
“Please, Judy,” Matt pleaded, grabbing onto my arm. “I really want you to stay.”
“It would be nice to have another woman at the table,” Irene agreed, a flicker of hope in her eyes.
She truly was desperate for friends, and she would get them any way that she could. I glanced up at Gavin, hoping that he would say something to help me out here. But he just sighed and ran his fingers through his hair. He glanced at Irene and then at Matt before he turned towards the maid who had walked in upon his command.
“Set an extra plate for Miss Montague,” he ordered.
My entire heart fell deep into my stomach
“Yes, Alpha,” the maid said, bowing her head in respect and quickly hurrying towards the kitchen.
Gavin then turned to look at me, his eyes hard and his face expressionless. I stared at him in disbelief. I couldn’t believe he just did that. It was clear from his expression that he didn’t want me to stay, so why was he forcing me?
I wanted to ask him, but I didn’t want to make a scene in front of Matt; he was jumping up and down excitedly because I was joining them for dinner, and I didn’t want to burst his little bubble. That was probably what Gavin was thinking too; from what I heard, Matt being happy and excited about something was a rarity. I would hate myself if I was the reason that smile got wiped from his face.
“This is so exciting,” Irene said, clapping her hands together. “Come on, Matt. Let’s get ready for dinner.”
Matt nodded and went with Irene toward the kitchen, leaving me alone with Gavin. I immediately turned and glared up at him, my lips pressed in a thin line and my eyes harrowed. He pretended he didn’t notice; he looked everywhere but me and that only made me even more mad.
“What was that?” I asked him, putting my hands on my hips as I continued to stare at him.
“What was what?” He asked, playing dumb.
I rolled my eyes at the act.
“Why would you ask the maid to set an extra plate for me?” I asked, exasperated.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...