Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 49
Chapter 0049
She opened it with eagerness and when she saw the pink gens inside, she gasped loudly, her eyes lighting up with excitement and a large smile spreading across her glossy lips.
“Oh, Dad!” She gasped as she wrapped her arms around me hugging me tightly. “I love it! Thank you so much.”
She pulled away from me and ran over to Judy to show her what I got her.
“I’ve been wanting something special for the inside of my car; this would look so cute on my mirror. Don’t you think?” She asked Judy as she showed her the gems.
“That was my thought,” I agreed.
Judy glanced at the gems and gave Irene a small smile; it was forced, but I was surprised that Judy was actually trying to get along with her considering Irene was marrying her fated mate. My wolf let out a huff at my thoughts and I shook him away.
“It’s really pretty,” Judy finally said after a beat of silence. It’ll look nice.”
Irene bounced excitedly.
“I’m going to put them in my car right now. Come meet me before you leave!” She said and then she hurried out of her bedroom, leaving me alone with Judy. I looked at Judy and stared, once again, at her outfit with a deep
frown.
“I thought we had an agreement about your clothes?” I told her harshly.
Her face blanched and she swallowed the lump in her throa
“I had a bit of an accident with my clothes,” she told me, shrugging like it was no big deal.
“What kind of accident?” I asked her, my tone deepening. I fold myself that I only cared because if there was an accident on my property, with my employees, I needed to know about it.
She bit her bottom lip.
“During my sparring with Matt, I tore my shirt,” she told me.
She wouldn’t look at me, which led me to believe there was more to the story, and if I knew Matt, I would bet that he had something to do with her torn shirt. It was clear she was trying to cover up for him though and I wasn’t going to press her any further.
“Irene was kind enough to let me borrow her clothes,” Judy finished. “But I won’t stay. I should get going.”
I remained unmoved as she neared me to get to the door, her arm brushing across mine gently, causing my heart to skip a beat. I furrowed my brows at the feeling, not understanding what it meant. Judy paused and I wondered if she felt something too. Her gaze lifted and met mine and for a moment, it felt as if time had stopped completely, and we were the only two in the entire world.
“I’ll see you later,” she said, her voice coming out breathily
I managed to nod and watched as she hurried out of the room. My cock twitched in my pants and silently cursed myself for letting this woman get to me like this. My wolf was stirring around with the need for her, and I quickly silenced him, blocking him from my mind.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...