Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 51
Chapter 0051
Gavin sat down at the table, and I hesitantly sat beside him.
One maid scurried into the room holding a bottle of wine and another bottle of apple juice. She immediately poured Irene a glass of wine and Matt a glass of apple juice. She walked around the table towards Gavin and filled his glass with wine as well. Once she got to me, she gave me a polite smile.
“Wine, madam?” She asked.
“I’ll take apple juice,” I said quickly.
There was no way I was drinking while here; I needed to keep a clear head and as of right now, I didn’t trust drunk Judy when it came to Gavin.
She looked startled but she nodded and poured me a glass of apple juice. After she left, Irene looked at me with a frown.
“You don’t drink?” she asked.
only on occasions,” I told her.
Before she could reply, another maid walked into the room rolling in a car filled with covered food items. They smelled so good, at this point, I didn’t even care what they were. She uncovered one and I gasped. at the large T–bone steaks on the platter. There were 4 of them, one for each of us, and they were still sizzling on the metal pan, bleeding and marinating in their juices. My mouth was watering as she put a steak on each of our plates.
She
uncovered another platter and saw a mound of mashed potatoes, seasoned with garlic. She scooped healthy portions on our plates. The next platter was mixed veggies, roasted in butter and seasoned with salt and pepper.
“Is there anything else I can get for you, Alpha?” She asked as she scooted the cart away from the table.
“That’s everything,” Gavin said, his eyes fixed on his food. “Thank you,” he surprised me by adding.
She nodded, beaming at his words before she turned and left.
“This looks incredible,” I breathed, taking in the different colors and scents.
“Our maids cook the best foods,” Irene agreed as she picked up her fork and knife
I picked up my own fork and knife and I started to digin; the steak was medium rare and cooked to perfection. It practically cut like butter and the flavors burst on my tongue as I chewed slowly. Both my stomach and my wolf were in complete contentment, which relaxed me immensely.
“How’s tutoring going?” Gavin asked, glancing at Math who was picking apart his steak and eating around the fatty edges.
He glanced at Gavin as if he was surprised, he was asking.
“It’s great,” he answered after a beat of silence. “Judy is the best. She teaches me things that no other tutor has ever taught me!”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...