Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 48
Chapter 0048
Gavin’s POV
“I picked up the pink gems you requested,” Beta Taylor said as I walked into the villa. He held out a long black case to me and I took it without hesitation. I opened it and smiled at the pretty string of pink gems. This would look great on the mirror in Irene’s new car. She was going to love this.
I glanced at the clock and saw that it was turning into late evening. I was home earlier than usual; even Adam took notice of my presence, but he wouldn’t dare ask me about it since I ordered that he doesn’t speak in my presence until I say otherwise.
Irene was most likely out with Ethan at this hour and Matt was probably finishing up with his tutoring session.
“Was there anything else you needed before I head home?” Taylor asked, glancing at his wristwatch.
“No, have a good night,” I said to my long–time friend and Beta.
Taylor grinned as he turned towards the door.
“Yeah, you too,” he said, his tone suggestive. I rolled my eyes and watched as he left the villa.
Shaking my head, I turned towards the stairway and took the stairs two at a time. There was no S
in waiting for Irene to show up because if she was with Ethan, she probably wouldn’t be returning tonight. She’s been spending
most of her nights at Ethan’s house; sometimes he stays the night here and I pretend that I don’t know about it.
I walked to her room, and I grabbed the doorknob; I’ll put this gift on her pillow for when she returns. She wanted something special for her new car and I got her the perfect thing. I couldn’t wait for her to see this gift, but for now, I would have to be a little patient.
I pushed the door open and that’s when the strong scent of lavender and vanilla hit my senses. I completely froze when my eyes found a very startled Judy staring back at me. Then, my eyes lowered, and I was greeted with two very bodacious sets of breasts that made my wolf immediately growl with need.
Her gasp and shriek hadn’t broken me out of my trance just yet, but when she used a shirt to cover her body, I blinked a few times and lifted my gaze to meet hers.
“What the hell are you doing in my daughter’s room?” I asked her, my voice coming out harder than I meant it.
She wasn’t supposed to be on the second floor where our personal bedrooms and bathrooms were. That was one of the rules we instated when she started working as Matt’s tutor.
‘Do you always barge into your daughters‘ room without knocking?” She countered, her voice not wavering
My eyes darkened as I glared at her and just when I was about to answer, Irene poked her head out from around me and frowned at me.
“Dad?” She asked. “Why are you home so early?”
I glared at her, my eyes narrowed.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...