“What are you doing here?” I asked, staring between him and Nan.
Nan had a slight blush on her cheeks, and I had to fight to keep from smiling.
“What do you think I’m doing here?” He asked, raising his brows. “You gave me an address; did you think I wouldn’t use it?”
“You couldn’t wait until we returned?” I asked, folding my arms across my chest. I approved of him being here, but at the same time, I knew Nan came here to escape him and get some space.
I tried to gauge her reaction, but she was hard to read.
“No,” he said, his eyes meeting mine. “It couldn’t wait.”
I stared at him for a long time, seeing the sincerity in his eyes, before turning to Nan.
“Can we talk?” I asked her; she lifted her gaze to meet mine and then nodded; a flicker of relief went through her eyes, and I knew she was grateful for the distraction. I told Sammy I’d be back before I grabbed Nan by the hand and pulled her along with me to a private area, away from wandering ears.
The second we were alone, I turned to face her. After a beat of silence, I wrapped my arms around her and pulled her into a tight hug, one I knew she needed desperately. She waited no time, hugging me back, her shoulders shaking as she cried.
“I can’t tell what’s happening, Nan. Are you happy or sad?”.
“I don’t know,” she admitted. “I’m terrified. I’m not sure why he’s even here. He saw Tyler put his hands on me, and then he lost it… nearly killed him. I brought him to the suite so I could clean up, and we started talking. I asked him if he wanted to reject me, and he straight up said he doesn’t know.”
My eyes grew wide as a wave of anger washed through me. How could he say such a thing to her?
I pulled away from her but kept my hands on her arms; tears were spilling out of her eyes.
“Oh, Nan,” I whispered, not sure what more to say.
She sniffled and wiped the tears off her cheeks with the back of her hand.
“After that, the conversation kind of got awkward, and we were both having trouble breathing. I found this garden the other day, and I thought it would be a nice place to continue this conversation. So, here we are… making awkward small talk and not discussing the real problems. That’s pretty much when you arrived.”
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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....