Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 351
Judy’s POV
Sammy and I went through the front foyer of the resort, where she saw Tyler dragging Nan. My heart was pounding against my rib cage at the thought of something happening to her. I never trusted Tyler, and I should have tried harder to get her to cut ties with him, but I stupidly didn’t listen to my intuition.
My sense of urgency to get to my best friend was real. The sun hadn’t set yet, so at least there was enough daylight where it would be easy to spot them. I just hoped it wasn’t too late when we got there.
“That stupid bitch,” I heard a familiar voice saying as soon as we got outside.
I glanced at Sammy, and we both had identical frowns marring our faces. We looked around, trying to find the source of the voice.
“I can’t believe she had the audacity to leave you.”
“And look at your face,” another familiar voice said. “We should seriously sue them for this.”
“Just forget it,” a male voice growled, anger evident in his tone. “I won’t let either of them get away with this.”
I think I knew those voices well, and if I was right, then I’ll find out where Nan is.
When I rounded the corner, I paused when I saw Mac, Kelsey, and Tyler.
Tyler was badly beaten to the point where I barely recognized him. Though it was evident that his wolf was healing him as they spoke. Kelsey was still applying bandages and cream to his face, though, while Mac paced back and forth, furious.
Mac was actually the one who saw me first, and her eyes narrowed, a deadly look in them.
“Are you here to finish the job?” She spat. “Hadn’t my cousin gone through enough?”
“Not sure,” I shot back, my eyes locked on Tyler’s swollen gaze. “Has he?”
I wasn’t sure what he did, but something in me was saying he deserved it.
“Your bitch of a friend got someone to beat the shit out of him,” Kelsey hissed, her eyes red with fury, much like Mac’s eyes. “Who’s going to pay for his medical expenses? We should seriously sue.”
“My friend?” I asked, letting out a breath. “Are you talking about Nan?”
“Who else?” Kelsey growled.
My heart fell into my stomach; something happened with Nan.
“What did he do to her?” I asked, my tone growing deep and with a hint of deadliness in it.
“Nothing,” Tyler spat, clearly lying.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....