Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 217
Chapter 0217
Gavin’s POV
I stepped out of the shower and grabbed a towel, wrapping it around my waste. By the time I left the bathroom, Judy wasn’t in bed anymore. I frowned at the messy bed and glanced around the room; my brows furrowed. I hadn’t even realized she was awake
I grabbed my clothes and quickly put them on, not bothering to do anything with my wet hair. I left the bedroom and went down the stairs, only to see Harper walking around the corner.
“Is Judy in the kitchen?” I asked as I adjusted my shirt into my pants.
Harper glanced up at me with a frown.
“No, Alpha. She said she had to get to school early this morning and left,” Harper explained, halting my
steps.
I turned to look at her, my eyes narrowed.
“She left?”
“Yes, sir,” Harper answered before she turned and hurried away. A low growl escaped my throat; how could Judy just leave like that? She didn’t even say anything to me about it. I wondered if she mentioned something to that Chester character. I couldn’t stand Chester; I’m not sure why I’ve kept him around. He’s always been like this… a flirt. He cares more about making the women around him melt than he does his actual job.
Even though I had to admit, he was pretty good at his job too. His food was always delicious, and it was the one thing I looked forward to when I came to this section of the pack. Well, it wasn’t until Judy started to live here.
The kitchen smelled amazing when I walked in and I wasn’t surprised to see Chester behind the counter, cooking away and making his kitchen aids chuckle with his witty banter and smooth words.
I rolled my eyes.
“Stop flirting with your coworkers,” I said as I walked in, making him freeze.
When he glanced over his shoulder at me, he flashed me a smile.
“Sorry, Alpha. I can’t help myself. Maybe you shouldn’t have hired such beautiful women to work for you,” he said, winking.
I rolled my eyes, knowing exactly what he was doing; made the women in the kitchen swoon and their knees buckle.
“I don’t pay you to flirt,” I muttered, sitting at the counter. “I hired you to cook.”
“Can’t I do both?” He asked.
“Don”
“Don’t you have a thing with Harper?” I asked, narrowing my eyes, and making him frown.
I’m sure he wasn’t expecting I would know about that make it a point to know everything about
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everything. I see the way Harper looked at him and on more than one occasion I would hear them in the supply closet, or in his bedroom while I was walking by. I also noticed the glant hickey Harper was sporting… I wasn’t an idiot.
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I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...