Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 216
Chapter 0216
Fury climbed its way through Irene’s chest as she clutched her phone tightly. She needed Judy to get out of that mansion; she was only doing this so she could weasel her way back into Ethan’s life and by the looks of things… it was working.
She knew people in the media, and she knew if word got out about this little relationship, it would not doubt scare Judy away. Maybe for good this time.
She pulled out her phone and searched for her contact before she reached the familiar name she knew too well. She pressed the call button and put the phone to her cheek.
“Please tell me you have something for me,” her friend said, sounding bored out of his mind. “I’ve hit a dry spell, and I might lose my job if I don’t come up with a good enough story to keep the attention of literally everyone.”
“Oh, I might have just the story you need,” Irene told him with a smile lighting her face; she loved his enthusiasm, and she knew he would do whatever it took to milk this story. “Hold on, I’m sending you something.
She sent him the photo and waited for him to receive it.
“What is this?” He asked. “Is that your father?”
“Yes,” Irene answered. “That’s my father in the arms of his lover. My brother’s tutor. She is literally my age and she’s only after him to get close to my fiancé. It’s so obvious. I wanted her exposed for the fraud that she is. Find out what you can about her and publish this story.”
“I don’t take orders from you,” her friend teased.
“Do you want the story or not?” Irene asked, rolling her eyes.
“Oh, I want the story,” her friend chuckled. “Give me one day and I’ll have this baby published everywhere.”
You”
“I was hoping you might,” Irene said with a smile spreading across her lips. “I’m counting on you. With those words left in the air, Irene hung up the phone and waited for her handy work to unfold.
Judy’s POV
“So why are we having a tutoring session here?” Matt asked after Gavin left to take a shower in the bathroom upstairs.
“Why not? Do you not like it here?” I asked him from across the living room table.
He shrugged.
“I mean it’s fine, but it’s kind of far. Did you have to travel far to get here?” He asked thoughtfully.
“It’s a lot closer than you might think, “I told him. “You don’t need to worry about it. But we are going to be meeting here for the next unforeseen future. At least until the film crew is done at the villa.”
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He nodded.
“It’s overwhelming there with so many people,” he admitted. “I’m glad to get out of there. It’s nice here. It’s peaceful.”
I smiled.
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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...