Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 215
Chapter 0215
Third Person POV
Ethan went to Judy’s school late on Monday evening, knowing he was going to be getting out of class at any moment. He had stalked her over the weekend, but she hadn’t left the mansion in the last 2 days, nor had Gavin returned since he left Friday night. Ethan had no choice but to wait outside of Judy’s school in his car and watch her as she left.
She got into the car she usually got in whenever Ethan saw her. It was Gavin’s driver’s car. He was most likely taking her to her tutoring session with Matt. It was pointless to follow them at this point, knowing they were most likely going to the Villa. But Ethan couldn’t seem to help himself.
He drove a distance behind them, making sure to stay a few cars behind at least to not draw suspicion to his vehicle. When they reached the Silver Crescent pack and started to make strange turns, Ethan knew they weren’t headed to the villa. They drove a few minutes further until they finally reached the North of the border. Ethan pulled off to the side as he watched Judy get out of the car; they were at the mansion.
At that moment he noticed a man standing at the entrance of the mansion and when he got a closer look, he realized it was Gavin. He was waiting for Judy, and he looked a bit awkward as she approached them. They were talking and Ethan would give anything to be able to hear what they were saying to one another. He rolled down his window slightly to see if he could channel his wolf’s hearing, but it was no use. His hearing wasn’t as strong as most because he wasn’t officially an Alpha yet.
Gavin stepped closer to Judy and Ethan noticed the blush creeping up her nose as she stared up at him. They looked far too intimate to be just casual and it was strange that she was here at this mansion. Why would Judy be here? Unless she truly was living with hun.
Ethan watched as the corner of Judy’s lips turned upward into a smile and then Gavin wrapped his arms around Judy, pulling her close to him in a far too intimate hug. Ethan’s wolf released a low growl at the sight of his mate in the arms of another man. Ethan grabbed his phone and didn’t hesitate to snap some photos of the scene before him.
Then, it was interrupted by Matthew who was shouting for Judy to join him in the mansion. Gavin ran his fingers through his hair as he watched Judy walk into the mansion. After he exchanged some words with the driver, he followed Judy and Matt into the mansion as well.
Ethan was outraged at the sight that he witnessed. He immediately pulled up Irene’s contact information. He had to tread carefully with this, or else Irene could get the wrong impression and leave him. He couldn’t let her know that he’d been stalking Judy and waiting for her to be seen with Gavin.
He put the picture in an attachment and then sent Irene a message.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...