Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 214
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He raised his brows at me.
“I think she likes toying with me. you think?”
m just sick of it. Even I deserve a little more respect than that; don’t
“Well, yes, of course,” I agreed. “But maybe she doesn’t want to toy with you anymore. Perhaps that’s what she’s been wanting to tell you since last night.
He gave me a pointed look.
“I don’t think it really matters. We don’t have a future This was only meant to be fun,” he told me. There’s nothing more to it.”
“I don’t think that’s true,” I said giving him a knowing look “You wouldn’t be so upset if you didn’t care for her at least a little.”
I smiled as I took a bite of the delicious omelet, moaning in satisfaction.
“I like sex,” he admitted. “She knew what this was from the beginning. I sleep around often and I’m not really to commit myself to just one girl. She’s not the only one I slept with this week.”
I crinkled my nose up at him.
“Gross, Chester,” I told him.
He laughed and picked an olive off my plate, throwing it in the air and catching it with his mouth effortlessly.
“Well, when you decide to actually be serious about a relationship, you should keep Harper in mind,” I
told him.
He smirked at me as he poured me a cup of coffee.
“I’ll think about it.”
I smiled, pleased with my own meddling.
After breakfast, I also went to seek out Harper to make sure she was okay as well. She was pretty much the same as Chester. Confused and upset. As I thought, she was totally into him and wanted more than just sex. She had been thinking about it all night and she was seeking him out last night to tell him just that. But then she couldn’t find him, so she had to wait until this morning, and he blew her off completely.
She was really heartbroken over the ordeal and when I found her, she was crying. We had a quick heart- to–heart before she went off to do her duties.
I pretty much spent the rest of the weekend as a hermit. I wasn’t surprised that Gavin hadn’t come back to see me at all during the weekend. After I pretty much jumped his bones, I wasn’t really expecting him
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to.
On Monday, I went to school and caught up with Nan in the student lounge while we studied for upcoming exams. I wanted to ask her about her mate and what she knew about him, but telling from her
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body language and how she avoided the topic, I knew she didn’t want to talk about it. She probably didn’t even know that she already told me about it. I didn’t want to embarrass her, so I chose to not say anything until she said something.
Unfortunately, she didn’t.
At the end of the day, Leroy picked me up and brought me to the mansion. I was surprised when we got there, and Gavin was standing outside.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...