Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 213
Chapter 0213
Judy’s POV
I was so embarrassed. I couldn’t believe I allowed myself to get drugged last night and then threw myself at Gavin. I hated that I could remember most of what happened last night. It was no wonder he left in the middle of the night. He could barely stand to look at me.
I was surprised when I saw the Tylertol and water on the bedside table though. I knew Gavin had left that stuff and I found it incredibly sweet that he cared enough about me to do that. But still, if let mortified that I let myself get drugged in the first place.
I wanted to scream and cry but I refrained from doing so. I was stronger than that and I needed to get a hold of myself. I grabbed my phone off the nightstand after I was done taking the medicine and I glanced at the screen, sighing when I saw Nan’s name lash across the screen from a new text message.
I swiped the screen on and opened the message.
Nan: I barely remember last night. Did you get home okay?
I pressed the reply and typed my own message.
Me: Yes. Gavin took us both home. How are you feeling?”
Nan: Like shit. But I’m glad you’re okay. Did I do anything stupid last night
Me: Not at all. Just get some rest today and we can talk later.
I put my phone back on the nightstand and sighed; it was better if she didn’t know how she threw up all over the place. She also mentioned to me about finding her mate. I didn’t want to worry her too much about the things she told me, so I chose not to tell her right now. But that didn’t mean I wasn’t going to grill her later. I needed to know every detail about this supposed mate of hers. From the sounds of it, he went on a date with another woman last night and it drove Nan to drink way more than she would have normally drunk.
I couldn’t blame her for it; I’m sure it wasn’t easy. A mate’s betrayal was heart–wrenching. I quickly threw on some clothes and made my way downstairs. I was starving after last night and I was eager to see what kind of food Chester made this morning.
When I entered the kitchen, I saw him slaving over the stove. Harper was also in the kitchen, and she looked like she was talking to him, but he was barely paying attention to what she was saying. She was looking upset over the ordeal and folded her arms across her chest.
“I’m not sure why you are acting like that,” she hissed
“Because you were the one who said we needed to keep our felationship professional, so that’s what I’m doing,” he told her sounding way harsher than I ever thought Chester was capable of sounding.
“Everything okay?” I asked as I entered the kitchen and sat at the counter beside Harper.
“Chester is acting like a jerk,” she murmured, narrowing her eyes at him. “I’m not sure what I didn’t deserve that treatment…”
Chester spun around his spatula in hand.
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Chapter 0213
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...