Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 212
Chapter 0212
“I love you, Irene,” he told her softly. “Remember that.”
She looked hesitant for a moment, but she nodded and gave him a faint smile.
He kissed her one last time before she left the car and went inside the villa. After she was gone, Ethan drove off in the direction of the Northern section of the pack. He drove for a long while until he finally found a large mansion–type building with Gavin’s car in the driveway. Ethan was just about to get out of the car but then he saw Gavin hurrying out of the front door, his hair disheveled and his clothes wrinkled. He was working on adjusting his shirt as he reached his car and quickly disappeared through the door.
Etan froze entirely as he watched Gavin’s car drive off quickly. He was in such a hurry that he didn’t even notice Ethan’s car sitting out front. Ethan’s brows furrowed as he looked up at the building that Gavin had just left. There was only one light on in the entire building and it was the second floor, facing the rest of the pack. He saw a shadow along the window and then he saw something that made his breath hitch in his throat.
Was that Judy?
Was she staring out the window and in the direction that Gavin left?
She looked disheveled and there was a bit of sadness in her eyes. But then she turned away. Moments later the light was turning off and the shadow of Judy was gone. Ethan stared up at the window dumbfounded.
What the fuck was Judy doing here? And why was Gavin leaving her in the middle of the night?
He grabbed his phone and dialed his sister’s number, knowing that she would have all the answers for him. The last he heard about Judy’s living arrangement was that she was now living with her best friend Nan. But maybe that wasn’t entirely the truth.
“Hello, Big Brother,” Kelsey said on the other end of the phone. “What can I do for you?”
“Mom t
told me that Judy went to live with her best friend, Nan,” Ethan said without hesitation. “Did she tell me the truth?”
There was a slight hesitation on the other end for a moment.
“Well, I don’t think any of us really knows where she went,” Kelsey admitted. “It all happened so fast, and it was really strange.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...