Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 211
Chapter 0211
Third Person POV
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Ethan had been trying to act more tentative towards trene since he almost lost her a couple of times. Now that Judy was back in the villa and tutoring Matt, he’s been able to keep a close eye on her. He still had every reason to make her his mistress despite planning to marry Irene, but he needed to play things carefully going forward so Irene wouldn’t suspect anything. So, he’s been watching her from afar and trying to keep her at a distance.
However, Irene has been acting strangely and Ethan couldn’t figure out why. She seemed jumpler like at any moment someone was going to come out from the corner and get her. Whatever that meant. She had been avoiding Matt more than usual and she also had been avoiding Judy like the plague. Ethan understood why she had been avoiding Judy; ever since she found out that Judy was his actual fated mate, she had been skeptical of his relationship with her, despite him dodging a bullet and blaming the entire thing on Judy. He told her that Judy was still after him and was only in the villa, working as Matt’s tutor, so she could get close to him. It was a complete lie, but if Irene knew the truth, she would leave him, no doubt.
Since Irene found out that Ethan and Judy were fated mates, she hadn’t been wanting to touch him. At least not intimately, they haven’t had sex yet because he wanted to wait until after marriage, but they had kissed many times before. They’ve even had some heated make–out sessions; it’s been almost a week since finding out Ethan’s secret and now Irene won’t touch him. He knew she was still upset about being lied to, despite the fact that he convinced her it was mainly Judy’s fault.
The villa had been busy lately with the film crew crowding around and filming that movie. Irene had been hanging around the villa trying to get on Skyla’s good side and Ethan had been trying his best to support his fiancé. He knew that she was trying to set her father up with Skyla for whatever reason, but he wasn’t exactly sure why. Sure, Skyla was gorgeous, and it would be kind of cool to have her as a stepmother, but Irene seemed almost obsessed with the idea.
Ethan had also noticed that Irene’s father hadn’t been around the villa as much and he wondered if it had to do with the fact that Skyla was all over him.
“Where has your father been?” Ethan asked Irene during their meal. He wanted to take Irene out to the dinner to show her that he did in fact love her, even if he truly didn’t.
She glanced up at him with a small frown on her lips.
“What do you mean?”
“He hasn’t really spent a lot of time at the villa. Only a little bit when the film crew needs him,” he pointed out. “Do you know where he’s been spending his time?”
She shook her head and then shrugged.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...