Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 210
Chapter 0210
The thought would have terrified me if I wasn’t so wrapped up in this lust.
“Just like that…” she pleaded. “Don’t stop.”
I wasn’t planning on it.
I bit her clit gently and that was enough for her undoing, she gasped and then she fell over the edge; her entire body was wracked with trembles as she orgasmed. I continued to suck and tease her until she was completely limp on the bed. Once she was settled, I kissed her clit gently before pulling my fingers out of her and kissing along the scams of her body until I reached her lips again.
I gave her a gentle kiss and saw that she was fast asleep. I knew it was because of the drugs. Her swollen lips were parted slightly, and her breathing had leveled. Her cheeks were slightly pink, and she looked so peaceful at this moment… she even looked beautiful.
My heart stilled for a moment and then I quickly climbed off her, my cock hard and waiting in my pants. I knew if I didn’t take care of this now it would be a long night. I gave Judy one last kiss on her cheek before I retreated to the bathroom.
I turned on the shower and looked at myself in the mirror. I was sweating and my cheeks were slightly flushed as well. What was wrong with me? This wasn’t how I normally acted.
I shook the thought of my head and stripped off my clothing before stepping into the shower. I leaned my head against the shower wall and grabbed a hold of my erect manhood. It was so hard that it almost hurt. I closed my eyes and imagined Judy’s beautiful face; I imagined her getting on her knees and wrapping her pretty swollen lips around my cock. I imagined what her tongue would feel like sliding up at the shaft and tasting the beads of cum forming at the tip.
I imagined what it would feel like to hit the back of her throat and hear her gagging noises as she took me in… all of me. I stroked up and down, quickening my pace as the sounds of her breathy moans filled my ears.
I thought about digging my fingers into her hair and holding her in place as I fucked her pretty little mouth. I would order her to look at me so I could see what she looked like as I had my way with her face. My cock was so deep in her throat that she could only Breathe out of her nose, her body at my mercy. She would think she had the upper hand and that she was in control, but in reality, I was the one in control. I was the one taking what I needed from her.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...