Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 205
Chapter 0205
I was surprised when he returned with a red solo cup of water. I was expecting a water bottle or something, but he didn’t seem to be fazed by it and he handed it to me with a grin. I glanced in the cup but sure enough, I saw clear liquid. It didn’t smell like anything either, so I relaxed a little and smiled gratefully at him.
“Thank you,” I told him as I brought the cup to my li
The taste was a little off… I crinkled my nose and stared back at the cup before looking up at him.
“It’s non–filtered,” he explained. “We don’t have any filtered water right now. We just ran out.”
I nodded; that did make sense. I took another sip; though, it tasted strange, it felt good in comparison to the beer. As I drank a bit more, I looked up at him and he saw that he was watching me with a curious expression on his face.
“So, are you seeing anybody?” he asked.
I was surprised by the question, but I tried not to show it on my face. This was a strange way to pick upa woman; standing outside of the bathroom while her best friend puked up her guts.
“No,” I told him, though I wasn’t sure if that was entirely true. As of right now, it didn’t feel like I was seeing anyone. But would Gavin agree with me? “But I’m not exactly looking for anyone to see either.”
He nodded.
“I get that,” he told me. “I hadn’t really dated for a long time. Despite living in a frat house. Sure, I have women throwing themselves at me, but none of them really kept my interest. Not like you at least.”
I smiled as I took another sip of the water.
“You’re a smooth talker,” I teased. “That’s can be dangerous.
“Why is that dangerous?”
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“Because I’m sure you can get what you want with just your words,” I told him.
As I spoke, I realized my cheeks were getting warm and my voice was starting to sound a bit far away to my ears. I shook off the feeling, thinking was probably a bit tired and lightheaded from the beer I drank earlier.
“Maybe I can,” he said, stepping closer to me. “And is that a problem?”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...