Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 204
Chapter 0204
“Who are you talking about?” I asked. 1 thought maybe she was just talking out of her drunken state, but when I looked into her eyes, I saw that they were serious and oddly focused. “Nan?” I asked her.
met my mate…” was the last thing she said before she doubled over and puked all over my shoes.
I groaned as 1 stood to my feet quickly, that was the last thing I expected her to say. But it was overshadowed by the fact that she just threw up on me and all over the ground at the frat house. I needed to take care of her before asking any questions I helped her to her feet before she puked again and guided her to the bathroom. It was a struggle though because she was wiggling around and crying at the same time. Not to mention she was still kind of throwing up. I was desperately trying to avoid the puke streams.
Another strong pair of arms wrapped around Nan’s body, lifting her up. I looked to see one of the frat boys standing beside me.
“I saw what happened. I’ll help you get her to the bathroom,” he told me.
I smiled gratefully at him and nodded.
“Thanks,” I murmured.
True to his words, he carried her into the bathroom. He stayed outside while I helped Nan inside. When it was clear that she wasn’t going to throw up anymore, I left the bathroom and pulled out my phone to call Leroy and have him pick us up. Nan was resting on the bathroom ground, trying to recover. Leroy assured me that he would be there as soon as he could, but traffic was pretty bad for some reason.
“Thanks for your help,” I told the guy.
He nodded and gave me a dimpled smile.
“It’s no problem. I had been watching you for most of the night. You are very beautiful,” he told me.
I blushed at the compliment.
“that’s kind of you to say,” I told him. “But you should know I’m not really looking for-”
“It was just a compliment,” he said, holding up his hand in defense. “You don’t have to worry about me. I’m not like those other guys.
“But you’re a frat boy?” I asked him.
“I am,” he said, shrugging. “But I’m different.
I laughed and shook my head at him.
“I’m sure you are,” I said. “I think I’ve seen you around campus before. You’re Kyle, right?”
He nodded.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...