Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 206
Chapter 0206
Something wasn’t right… and I had a feeling It was because of Kyle,
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Gavin’s POV
After Matt went to bed, I decided to go to the mansion and check on Judy. I didn’t like how we left things last night and there was a part of me that felt guilty over the ordeal. I knew I hurt her feelings, and I wanted to explain myself a little more so she could understand my side of things.
But when I got there, Judy wasn’t there.
“Where is she?” I asked Harper who was standing before me.
“She went to some party at her school,” Harper explained with a shrug. “I believe she said it was a frat party.”
A low growl escaped my throat; she went to a frat party by herself? Does she have any idea how dangerous that was? What was worse was the fact that Leroy was here. He was waiting for her to call him for a ride home.
“You should have stayed with her,” I said through my teeth.
“Sorry, Alpha,” Leroy said, bowing his head. “She insisted that I leave for right now.”
Before I could reprimand him even more, Leroy’s phone rang. He glanced at the screen and answered it with a frowIL.
“Hello?” He said.
He paused as he listened to the voice at the other end. His eyes narrowed and he nodded, despite them not being able to see him.
“Yeah, I’ll be there as soon as I can.”
He hung up the phone and turned to look at me.
“Who was that?” I asked impatiently.
“Judy<” he answered, gaining my attention. “I guess Nan is wasted and they both want to get picked up. I’ll take Nan home and then bring Judy here right away.”
He started to leave but I followed after him.
“I’m coming too,” I told him.
He nodded and together we started to drive towards the school. We hit traffic and I groaned as we were only moving an inch every couple of minutes. The ambulance and police officers that zoomed past us indicated that there was an accident. I wasn’t surmised considering we were in the middle of the city.
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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...