Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 203
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Nan and I laughed at the sight of it and we started to mock dance in return. It was fun to let loose with my best friend, especially because she was just as silly as I was.
We drank our beer and the more I drank it, the better started to laste. Maybe this wouldn’t be so bad after all. Nan finished her beer first and she grabbed another one. She was also lightweight so she was getting tipsy off the one beer, I could only imagine how she would be after her second one.
“Beer bong outside!” One of the frat boys announced, it made everyone cheer and rush towards the back patio. Nan grabbed my arm and pulled me along with her. We joined the others around the beer bong table and when one of the frat boys asked who wanted to be his partner, I was surprised Nan volunteered.
“Nan, you’ve never played before,” I reminded her.
She laughed and shrugged.
“So what?” She said lightly. “There’s a first time for everything.”
She rushed towards the giant frat boy and high–fived him. He took one look at her and his brows raised; it was obvious he liked what he saw. He motioned for her to go first.
She missed the cup on her first try, making everyone, including her laugh. The guy on the other team got the ball in the cup on the first try and Nan was forced to drink. She chucked the entire cup of beer in one go and I was shocked by this.
The game continued on. Nan only got a couple of hits in, but for the most part, she lost pathetically. The guy on her team didn’t seem to mind though; he was enjoying the show of Nan jumping up and down and showing off her body.
By the end of the game, Nan was wasted, and I knew I was going to have to carry her out of there. I was a little tipsy too because I was on my second beer, but I wasn’t nearly as bad off as Nan. She could barely walk a straight line, and her words were all sloshed.
The guy on her team put his hand on her lower back and started to guide her away, whispering something in her ear. I frowned and followed after them, grabbing Nan’s hand and pulling her towards
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me.
“Hey!” The guy complained.
“Take a hike,” I ordered, pulling Nan along with me.
I couldn’t understand what she was saying, but she was murmuring something as I dragged her away from there.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...