Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 196
Chapter 0196
I didn’t realize what I was doing until everybody turned to stare at me. My wolf was furious at the sight of Skyla all over Gavin and I could hardly contain her. She wanted blood and I wasn’t sure if I could hold her back fully. She had never acted like this before and had to admit, I was a bit worried.
I felt Matt’s hand wrap around my wrist and that was the only thing that started to calm me. Even my wolf knew she couldn’t lose control with a child present. I took a steady deep breath and released it shakily. My eyes found Gavin’s and he didn’t look pleased with my outburst. He said something to Skyla who stepped away from him, her hands tucked in at her sides, and her eyes never left mine. She didn’t look pleased either; the others just looked at me curiously and were a little amused. I’m sure they lived for this kind of drama, and they were hoping something exciting would happen sooner or later.
Before I could grasp what was happening, Gavin was beside me. He grabbed my wrist and yanked me along with him and into the villa. I nearly stumbled over my feet in the process. I could feel his anger rolling off him in waves and it made me that much more nervous. I had never felt this type of anger coming off him before and it made it that much worse knowing it was directed at me.
When we were far enough away, he finally stopped walking and released his hold on me. He turned to face me, and I could see the anger crossing his face.
“Is this arrangement of ours too much for you?”
I was stunned by his question.
“W…what?” I asked him, my resolve fading.
“Is this going to be an issue? Are other women being around me? Because if it is, we should stop with this arrangement and just be boss and employer again. You can still remain in the mansion but-”
“I don’t know what happened,” I said quickly. “My wolf momentarily lost her mind, but she’s fine now.” He was quiet for a moment as he scanned my face.
“You made a fool out of yourself out there. You knew they were shooting today and shouldn’t have come out there. Didn’t Irene give you the notice?”
I frowned and grabbed my phone from my pocket. Irene hadn’t texted me at all. I knew she was upset with me about something, but why would she sabotage me like that? I glanced at Gavin and bit my lower lip.
“I must have missed her text,” I mumbled, not wanting to pin him against his daughter. I didn’t want to cause issues with the Landry family.
“I have to do damage. If you are going to act like a child, then you can leave. Do your tutoring sessions elsewhere,” he snapped before he turned his back on me. 1
His words were harsh, and they felt like a slap in the face. I wasn’t sure what to say or do, so I stood there, watching him walk away. A moment later, Matt joined me. He had a concerned frown on his lips. “Are you okay, Judy?” He asked.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...