Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 197
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“You want to talk about friendship?” She asked, stepping closer to me. “You are the one who wasn’t acting like a friend. You lied to me from the beginning and now you are angry because I’m the one who has the upper hand? You are pathetic and my father deserves better than to be played by you!”
My blood went cold.
“What are you talking about?” I asked her. “I never lied to you…”
Even as I spoke those words, I knew they weren’t true. But Irene couldn’t possibly know the truth about Ethan and me… could she?
Telling from the crazed look in her eyes… it was a possibility.
“You have been lying to me since the second we met!” Irene hissed; her eyes filled with a fire I had never seen before. “You told me nothing was going on between you and Ethan, but you lied of me, Judy! You didn’t tell me you were his fated mate!”
I was stunned that she knew this information.
How did she find out?? I wasn’t sure what to say, so I stared at her, dumbstruck.
“Nothing to say now, huh?” She murmured, shaking her head, her eyes filling with pity and disgust. Have you been sleeping with him this entire time? Is that why you never said anything? Am I the fool here? Are you and Ethan screwing-
“No!” I said sharply, cutting off her words. “Ethan and I are no longer together.”
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“Don’t bullshit me,” she said, tears filling her eyes. “You don’t just break up with a fated mate. It’s not possible. Either you did something so terrible that it made him walk away from you, or you are still screwing each other, and this is some kind of sick plan to get close to my father. I don’t know what your game plan is, but it’s not going to work!”
“I don’t know what you’re talking about,” I said, shaking my own head. “I’m not playing you, Irene. I’m not the one you need to be worried about!”
“I can’t believe a single thing that you say!” She hissed, stepping closer to me. “You are a liar, and I thought you were my friend. But that was a lie too. You were never my friend. You were plotting against
my fiancé.1” me from the beginning. You were after
“Ethan is not the saint you think he is…” I tried to reason with her; I wanted her to see that she was engaged to a monster, He was the one she needed to be mad at.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...