Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 195
Chapter 0195
“Don’t test me, Judy,” he murmured against me, his lips tracing the nape of my neck, his tongue slipping out. I trembled beneath him as he pinned me between his body and the wall. “I’m not in the mood.”
I wasn’t sure what to say or do, but at this moment, my body seemed to have a mind of its own. I lifted up one of my legs and wrapped it around his waist, grinding myself against him like a horny dog. I felt him hardening and it made me move faster, wanting to see how hard I could make him at this moment.
He let out another low growl before his lips covered mine and he kissed me as if he had been starving. I hadn’t realized how badly I wanted him until that moment, but we were soon ripping each other’s clothes off. Now completely naked, I was at his mercy, and I completely forgot why I was even angry with him in the first place. My heart was hammering against my chest at rapid speed, and I moaned into his mouth as he lifted me up and I wrapped both legs around his body. He pushed himself into me and I let out another breathy moan, speaking out his name
He nibbled on my bottom lip as he continued to thrust into me. He ran his lips down my neck, sending chills throughout my entire body. His little bites mark me without actually marking me.
He brought me over to bed and ravished my body as I enjoyed his. He sucked and bit every corner of me that he could, leaving his markings all over the place. Iran my fingers through his hair as he brought me to new heights. I was blinded by the lust that our conversation from before had flown right out of the window.
Some might call me foolish, but at this moment I didn’t care. When he pushed me over the edge and I screamed out his name, he growled loudly, his wolf surging forward and his canines elongated. I gasped at the sight, and I found myself wanting to bear my neck to him; my own wolf tried to surge as well, wanting to submit to him, but I held her back, confused by the gesture.
As Gavin reached his climax, he managed to pull his wolf back and he let out a distressed howl before submitting
ck into Gavin.
We were both breathing heavily as we came down from the peak. He quickly pulled out of me and gained a bit of distance so we could catch our breaths, neither of us looking at each other. I’m not sure either of us knew what to say at that moment, but my entire body was on fire.
“I should go,” he said as he quickly got off the bed. “I have some business today. But I’ll see you later at the villa.”
I nodded numbly and watched him as he quickly got dressed. He would barely even look at me and I
wondered what was runn
he would have told me.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...