Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 194
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In just a heartbeat, it felt like my entire world had been crashing down around me. Gavin lied to me. He had taken Skyla out on a date and kissed her… the evidence was in this new story and now I felt stupid for falling for such a nasty trick.
Hadn’t Ethan taught me anything?
I couldn’t trust anyone. They would all betray me. Ellian was my fated mate and even he betrayed me. Now Gavin was betraying me? The shower turned off and I quickly got out of bed, I grabbed a pair of jeans and a T–shirt. I wanted to get out of here before lie left the bathroom. I wasn’t sure I’d be able to face him right now. I was fuming and I knew it would only be bad.
My wolf was in despair, and she was also angry over the fact that Gavin had lied to us. What was wrong with me? Why did I keep getting played so badly like this?
Just as I reached the door, the bathroom door swung open and Gavin stepped out, wearing nothing but a towel wrapped around his waist. Beads of water trailed down his broad chest and I found myself staring
made my at it for the longest moment as it disappeared beneath the towel. Seeing him like this always heart skip a beat and it was a struggle to pull my eyes away from it and up at his face.
He was staring at me with an amused look in his eyes, having caught me checking him out. My cheeks flushed but it was mainly out of rage and not because of embarrassment. I was about to turn and leave, but his voice stopped me.
“Are you leaving for somewhere?” He asked, glancing at the time. “You don’t have to be at school for another few hours. I was wondering how you were feeling. If you want, we could…” his voice trailed off when he saw the hurt expression on my face.
“So, that’s why you spent the night here even after knowing I was sick?” I asked through my teeth. “Did you not get enough last night that you needed to get some from me as well?”
He narrowed his eyes, a frown marring his lips.
“What are you talking about?
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“Don’t play stupid with me, Gavin,” 1 all but shouted. I know exactly what you were doing last night, and I feel so stupid to believe that it wasn’t an actual date. But that was a lie. It was a date… you were on a date with her and then you came here and lied to me about it!”
A low growl escaped his throat as he stepped closer to me.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...