Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 193
Chapter 0192
Gavin’s POV
I immediately stepped away from her and wiped my mouth clean of her saliva. What the actual fuck just happened? Skyla’s face turned beat red at the sight of my obvious rejection of her advances. I turned my icy gaze to the paparazzi who noticed my fiery energy immediately and slowly lowered their cameras.
“Leave before I rip your throats out of your necks,” I said through my teeth, unleashing a bit of my wolf for extra strength. I knew that his eyes were shining through mine and turning my gaze glowing yellow. The paparazzi started to shake in their shoes as they murmured their apologies and quickly dispersed from the scene.
I was still fuming long after they had left; I was unable to move. I mindlinked Beta Taylor and told him to pick us up. I planned to just drop her off at the villa and then return to the mansion so I could see if Judy was okay.
I felt Skyla’s hand on my back after what felt like a long and awkward silence. I immediately tensed, my wolf growling and snapped in my mind and I held him back before he hurt her.
“Don’t touch me,” I said through my teeth and stepped away from her.
“Gavin-”
“It’s Alpha,” I snapped, turning my fiery gaze on her and flaring my nostrils as anger surged through ine. “You crossed a line tonight, Skyla. You shouldn’t have done that!”
“I…I’m sorry,” she murmured. “I just wanted to get them off my back. They wouldn’t stop until we gave them an answer they wanted.”
“I seemed to have stopped them perfectly fine without lying to them,” I seethed.
“You think that stopped them?” Skyla laughed, shaking her head. “They aren’t through with us just yet
“We are done here,” I said just as Taylor pulled up in the car. “Get in the car and speak nothing about
this to anyone.
She stared at me for a brief moment and then she smiled sweetly.
“Of course,” she said, brushing past me. “I won’t have to speak about this to anyone. They’ll already be talking about it by tomorrow.”
I had no idea what she was talking about, but I decided to ignore her. I sat in the front seat with Taylor while Skyla sat in the back seat. The further I was from her, the better it would be. My only thought at the moment was to get to Judy.
Judy’s POV
“Maybe it doesn’t mean anything.” Nan told me on the phone. I curled up in bed, tears staining my cheeks. Why was I acting like this? I don’t even know the full story yet I had no reason to act like I lost everything… I mean, Chester flirted with me and that doesn’t mean I’m about to screw his brains out.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...