Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 180
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Anger filled Irene but she tried hard to keep her temper under control while she was in the presence of her father.
“So, Judy did nothing wrong. Therefore, she gets to keep her job. I appreciate your concern, and I’m glad you care for your brother, but lay off Judy, okay?” He asked her firmly, raising his brows.
Her cheeks burned with heat, but she nodded her head
“Okay,” she murmured. “I’m sorry.”
He gave his daughter a small smile as he pulled her into his arms for a tight hug. She sighed and hugged him back before he released her.
“Are you going out with Ethan tonight?”
She nodded and bit her lower lip. She didn’t want Ethan to come here knowing Judy was here. He had been all over Irene this past week with Judy being gone, and now that she had returned, she worried that Ethan would revert back to his old ways and pine after her like a lost puppy.
“Yes,” she said. “I’ll probably spend the night at his place.”
Gavin nodded.
“Just be safe,” he warned. “Oh, by the way, the film crew will be here tomorrow. They are going to be staying in his villa, so I need you to be on your best behavior.”
Irene perked up immediately; she completely forgot about the movie being filmed in their pack.
“Skyla Sinclair will be here, right?” She asked. She couldn’t wait to meet the famous movie star and model. Skyla was her role model, and she had been looking forward to this for months since it was first brought up.
Gavin nodded.
“Yes,” he answered. “Try not to scare her away.”
“Can’t promise anything,” Irene teased.
Gavin smirked, stifling a full smile, as he shook his head at his daughter. He turned away and started back towards the parlor. Irene watched as he disappeared through the door. She walked towards the parlor as well and opened the door just a crack so she could peek into the room, watching Judy warily.
She noticed that Judy visibly lit up when Gavin returned and even Gavin had a smile on his face when he looked at Judy. He said something to her that Irene couldn’t quite hear and it made both Judy and Matt laugh.
They looked like a typical family and it irked Irene. She hated how comfortable and happy they all looked. It was obvious to her that Judy had a thing for her father and it was even more obvious that the feeling was mutual,
As Irene continued to watch their interactions, she started to think of a plan. Skyla Sinclair would soon be arriving at the pack.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...