Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 179
Chapter 0179
Third Person POV
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Irene was in the kitchen grabbing a bite to eat when she heard giggling in the parlor. She frowned and started towards the entryway. It’s been quiet around here for the past week, but that was mainly because Matt had been in the hospital. Even when he returned though, the villa appeared quieter than usual. She and Ethan had been spending a lot of time here because of that.
When she reached the parlor door, she heard a familiar voice, and her blood went completely cold.
No….
It couldn’t be.
She pushed the door open, and her entire body froze when she saw Judy seated on the couch and Matt beside her. They were studying, but they were talking about something that made Matt burst into a fit of giggles. Her father was seated in a nearby chair with a grin on his face as he watched the two of them. It made Irene’s stomach twist and turn as she glared at the scene in front of her.
Nobody noticed her entrance yet and she wasn’t sure what to say or do.
Judy wasn’t supposed to be back at this Villa. She had made sure of it. She pinned the blame for Matt’s allergic reaction on Judy. How could her father be so careless and allow her to keep her job like this? She thought she finally got rid of Judy, but she returned looking stronger than ever. She clenched her fists at her side and glared at Judy, unblinking.
Judy eventually felt Irene’s stare and lifted her gaze to meet hers; her smile dropped into a concerned frown.
“Oh, hey, Irene,” Judy said, skeptically as she studied Irene’s furious face.
This got the other’s attention as well; Gavin looked up at his daughter and he also frowned.
“Irene,” he greeted, narrowing his eyes at her. “Everything okay?”
“Daddy, can I talk to you for a minute?” She asked through her teeth as she walked across the parlor and out the other door until she was in the hallway. Gavin reluctantly followed after her, shutting the door behind him. He folded his arms across his chest and watched as his daughter paced the hallway, her eyes fixed on the ground and her breathing heavily as she fought to maintain her temper.
“What’s this about?” Gavin finally asked after what felt like a lifetime of silence.
“How could you let that monster back into our home after what she had done??” Irene finally asked, stopping her pacing to glare at her father.
“Irene-”
“She almost killed Matthew! Does that mean nothing to you??” Irene continued, cutting off Gavin before he could explain himself.
“Irene, listen-”
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...