Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 181
Chapter 0181
Judy’s POV
“He specifically said he doesn’t want Judy Montague to return to his office. Any further questions?” The receptionist said in a snarky tone.
My blood went cold from her words, and I stared at her startled. Had Gavin really told the receptionist to not let me back at his office? My heart hurt from the very thought, and I instinctively took a step back, feeling dejected. Her smug look said it all. She was telling the truth; Gavin truly did tell her to say this to
-
me.
“You can’t be that surprised,” she said, rolling her icy blue eyes. “You were escorted out of this office last time you were here. Obviously, he wouldn’t want you back here.”
I bit my lip and nodded; I heard her words, but I was having trouble processing what she was saying I sucked in a sharp breath, not sure what more to say. This plan was a bust and now I was even more embarrassed than I was when Gavin rejected me and then kicked me out. I started to turn away to leave because it was pointless staying here any further, but then I heard my name from a short distance and my entire body froze.
“Judy?”
Could this get any worse? Not only was I getting kicked out of the office building, but now Gavin was here to witness it and probably kick me out himself in front of this receptionist. I sighed, knowing I couldn’t avoid this any longer. I slowly turned towards him and forced a smile in his direction.
“Hello, Alpha,” I murmured. “I was coming to see you, but it seems I’m not allowed here. So, I’ll—”
“Who said you weren’t allowed here?” He asked.
I narrowed my eyes at him and then glanced at the receptionist who was red in the face and staring up at
him.
“You told me to tell her she wasn’t allowed back here if she were to ever return,” the receptionist reminded him.
He looked down at her, his lips turned into a deep frown as he stared at her.
“That was then,” he said through his teeth. “Things have changed since then and I’m pretty sure I already ripped that reminder off your desk.”
She glanced down at her notepad and her eyes widened when she didn’t see the note she left for herself to keep me out of the office building
“Next time you don’t call me first, you’re fired,” he growled, making her tremble in her seat.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...