Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 178
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“I would never do that, Judy,” she told me. “You can trust me.”
I knew she was right and that I could trust her, so I relaxed in my seat. It felt good to talk about this and get this whole thing out. I was glad that I had Nan in my corner and that I could confide in her in this kind of thing now.
“So, you moved in with him?” She asked, wiggling her brows.
“Yeah, well, apparently he has another mansion in his pack,” I told her.
She didn’t look surprised, she only nodded thoughtfully.
“He’s Gavin Landry, of course, he has multiple properties. That’s probably not even his only other mansion,” she told me.
“He went over to the Cash family manor for dinner to get to know them better and he saw me being treated like a slave. He was angry and ordered that I move into his mansion,” I continued to explain.
She looked as if she was about to shriek again, but then she caught herself and cleared her throat. I continued to tell her the story about how I wanted my mom to come too, but she insisted on staying but wanted me to go. Nan listened thoughtfully as we continued to sip on our coffees.
“So, he doesn’t know about the financial problems?” She asked.
I shook my head, but then I thought about it and shrugged.
“He knows I need the money and I’m sure he’s guessed that my family is struggling. But I don’t think he knows how bad it is. He doesn’t know my father is in jail,” I told her.
“I don’t get it. Why not tell him? You know the Landry corporation funds most of the businesses around the wolf kingdom, right?”
I sighed and ran my fingers through my hair.
“My father is a proud man and didn’t want to take any handouts from the Lycans. Plus, years ago, his business plan was rejected when he first presented it to Alpha Gavin, so he never bothered to try again.” I murmured. “He wanted to be able to do this by himself and prove himself worthy. He ended up making a deal with some loan sharks and took out way more money than the business was worth. Obviously, the business did well, but not well enough to pay back the sharks. Apparently, they charged a large amount of interest, so they require the money they loaned him, plus interest, which we don’t have. So, they charged him with theft.”
“Why not tell Gavin about this?” She asked. “He could help you easily and I’m sure he would if you were to ask.”
I shook my head and bit my lip, chewing on it vigorously.
“I’m embarrassed,” I admitted. “I don’t want him to think badly about my family and plus, I don’t think he remembers rejecting my father’s business plan. He’ll ask questions about why this business wasn’t Lycan funded, and I don’t really have answers for him.”
“You are just like your father,” Nan said with a smile. Too proud for your own good.”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...