Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 171
Chapter 0171
Judy’s POV
I wasn’t sure what I was expecting when I arrived at the mansion, but it was gorgeous and almost as big as Gavin’s villa. My mouth nearly fell open as we drove toward the glant stairs that led to the front door.
“This place is fully staffed,” Taylor explained. “It only doesn’t have a butler, but I don’t think you’ll need one. Gavin assigned Leroy to this mansion as well, so he will be here to give you rides to and from whenever you need them. He was assigned his own room with the staff so he will be here 24/7. Of course, I’ll be in and out as well and so will Gavin.”
I nodded along with each word he spoke, feeling incredibly overwhelmed.
“There are 4 maids here, one of them being the head mald, and a head chef with 2 kitchen aids. The maids each have a different role; there’s a maid for laundry, a maid for cleaning, and a maid for serving, and then the head maid is in charge of it all. Don’t hesitate to ask her for anything. All your things have been put in your room already, including your cell phone.”
I was relieved to hear that he recovered my cell phone from the Cash household; I hadn’t put it in my bag, and I worried that I would have to get a new one.
“The maids worked on getting your room together all morning and putting your things away so it should be easy for you to find what you need. Your schoolwork had been placed on your desk and everything,” Taylor continued, surprising me even further.
“That’s very thoughtful,” I told him. “Thank you for all of this.”
“Don’t thank me,” he said, glancing at me through the rear–view mirror. “It was all ordered by Gavin. He wanted to make this move was easy as possible. I think he feels bad about the whole Matt situation. He knows it wasn’t your fault and the one responsible has been dealt with.”
I nodded, already knowing this because Gavin told me
“I appreciate that,” I told him, glancing at my hands. Will I be able to see Matt again?”
“Of course,” Taylor said with a smirk. “You won’t be getting out of work that easily.”
“So, I still have a job?” I asked. Gavin already said as much, but I still wasn’t sure if it was true or not.
“Yes,” Taylor replied. “Matt refuses to have another tutor. You know he was willing to take the fall if it meant getting you back.”
“Wait what?” I asked, furrowing my brows.
“Before I found out the truth, Matt told Gavin that it was him who put the peanut butter in the sandwich. Claiming he forgot he was allergic,” Taylor laughed.
My eyes grew wide as I stared at Taylor.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...