Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 172
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I smiled.
“That’s very kind of you,” I told her. “But I’m okay for right now. Maybe later?”
She nodded.
“Of course,” she said thoughtfully.
Taylor turned me.
“I have to leave now but Gavin will be here later,” he assured me. “Harper will take you to your room and help you get settled.”
I nodded.
“Thank you, Taylor,” I said to him.
He nodded and then after a final goodbye, he left the mansion. I turned to Harper who kept a sweet smile on her lips.
“It’s nice to have someone to serve,” she said sweetly. “Alpha Gavin is here sometimes, but not nearly as much. It gets boring taking care of an empty house after a while.”
“I’m sure,” I chuckled. “I’m glad to be here.”
“Let me show you to your room,” she said sweetly.
As we walked up the stairs, she started to explain all the things this mansion had to offer. There was a library, a garden, an outdoor pool with a hot spring, and each bedroom had its own bathroom. I was used to having my own bathroom, so it was going to be nice to have that again.
When we reached the second floor, we walked down the wide and brightly lit corridor until we reached my room.
She stepped into the room first and my mouth fell open. Not only was it much bigger than the room I spent my entire life in, but it also had all my stuff. Even the bed had my comforter and sheets on it; all my pictures and awards were neatly placed on dressers and shelves. My books were on the bookshelf and as Taylor said, my schoolwork, along with my backpack, was on the desk on the far side of the room which sat in front of the large window that overlooked the packland.
There was another large bay window on the other side of the room that overlooked the gardens, and, in the distance, I could see the pool and the hot spring.
There was a vanity that held my makeup and hair supplies, and I wasn’t surprised when I peeked into the bathroom and saw that all my toiletries were already placed in their rightful spots. The bathroom included a large shower and a separate whirlpool tub, along with a toilet and plenty of counter space.
“The closet has all your clothes,” Harper said as I stepped out of the bathroom. She had the walk–in closet door opened and I peeked my head in to see it filled with all my clothes, along with a few new things that I didn’t recognize.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...